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Small and Specialty Poems

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Comment from sunnilicious
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The banana peels certainly do not belong on the floor. That would be the behavior of a very naughty individual. Great artwork. Nice flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
    Thank you sunnilicious
Comment from Joannforsberg
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Clap, clap, clap. I truly hope it is chosen as a concrete block for the downtown. Hopefully they will not be seeking only serious ones. For this is one people would so enjoy reading and it would lift the spirits of those upon this walk.

Having one that makes people smile would be such a gift. Blessings, JO

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
    Thank you. Mine didn't make it.
reply by Joannforsberg on 15-Jan-2013
    I wondered for often a committee will only chose the serious ones. The flowery poems and stories. Take pride it was still excellently written. And, I know you will read some and say: What??? JO
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
    Thank you Jo, I read them all. You are right, but I'm ok, just wish I could have been one. The others are good poets too.
Comment from doris1022
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did you win?? that is a fun idea to see poetry in the side walk.
Did your family grandbaby get out of the hospital and are they doing fine?

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
    No actually I didn't. But like with the contest here, at least I entered. Every body is OK thanks.
Comment from neighborkid
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Makes me want to go to St. Paul to see the poems imprinted in the sidewalks. The first part will fit the future of these sidewalks while the second part can easily be accomplished by careless people.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2013
    Thank you. They will be there this summer.