Psalms for the Journey
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Psalm for Those Who Puzzle"Talking to God over life's journey
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Comment from amarherig14
When we trust the Lord with our life, he will help fix that puzzle which is our life. He will give a clean slate and set us free.Well written with a good picture to send across your message. So,when we are broken ,He makes us whole.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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When we trust the Lord with our life, he will help fix that puzzle which is our life. He will give a clean slate and set us free.Well written with a good picture to send across your message. So,when we are broken ,He makes us whole.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
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You are welcome,jan. Love,Margie
Comment from c_lucas
Sometimes we get so wrapped up in life, that we forget John 3:16>17. We energed into a pool of self pity. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Sometimes we get so wrapped up in life, that we forget John 3:16>17. We energed into a pool of self pity. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
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You're welcome, Jan. Charlie
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello an such powerful words telling us how
we take too long
to reassemble fractured lives -
instead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up.
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Hello an such powerful words telling us how
we take too long
to reassemble fractured lives -
instead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up.
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Gert, thanks again for this exceptional rating
thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Jan,
This is a beautifully penned poem that touches my spiritual being. The imagery of the missing pieces adds a touch of me to the poem. How many times have I fallen to pieces spiritually only to try to pick up the pieces later. Without Christ filling in the missing parts to the puzzle, I would be one lost soul. The poem gives the reader much to think upon.
Curtis
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Jan,
This is a beautifully penned poem that touches my spiritual being. The imagery of the missing pieces adds a touch of me to the poem. How many times have I fallen to pieces spiritually only to try to pick up the pieces later. Without Christ filling in the missing parts to the puzzle, I would be one lost soul. The poem gives the reader much to think upon.
Curtis
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from Gungalo
sometimes, Lord,
that broken life is mine -
help me to remember
You believed
I was someone
worth dying for
Oh yes and He did die for you and me. Such a wonderful write my dear.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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sometimes, Lord,
that broken life is mine -
help me to remember
You believed
I was someone
worth dying for
Oh yes and He did die for you and me. Such a wonderful write my dear.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from minopavlic
The significance and very strength within the words of your poem are very enlightening, inspiring and highly motivating. Without an expectation, there can be no positive progression through life. Embrace the Light, and it will embrace you.
I am impressed by the limitless boundaries within the creativeness of your mind and this poem. Our influential impact, as you so eloquently described is central to our very being. Without that inner emotion, which gives our soul its subsistence, our existence becomes one of cold indifference.
Interesting reflection.
no_obstacle
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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The significance and very strength within the words of your poem are very enlightening, inspiring and highly motivating. Without an expectation, there can be no positive progression through life. Embrace the Light, and it will embrace you.
I am impressed by the limitless boundaries within the creativeness of your mind and this poem. Our influential impact, as you so eloquently described is central to our very being. Without that inner emotion, which gives our soul its subsistence, our existence becomes one of cold indifference.
Interesting reflection.
no_obstacle
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from Selina Stambi
This poem evoked a lot of thoughts and an inner psalm of praise - I was one of those puzzles that Jesus brought together.
You believed I was worth dying for ... that's what keeps pointing us back to Him, doesn't it?
Very well written, Rdf!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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This poem evoked a lot of thoughts and an inner psalm of praise - I was one of those puzzles that Jesus brought together.
You believed I was worth dying for ... that's what keeps pointing us back to Him, doesn't it?
Very well written, Rdf!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from Jewell McChesney
nstead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up
sometimes, Lord,
that broken life is mine -
help me to remember
You believed
I was someone
worth dying for
Wow...this is a powerful, insightful write.
This is inspiring and introspective.
Thank you for creating and sharing!
God bless you. My prayers are with you as well.
Jewell
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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nstead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up
sometimes, Lord,
that broken life is mine -
help me to remember
You believed
I was someone
worth dying for
Wow...this is a powerful, insightful write.
This is inspiring and introspective.
Thank you for creating and sharing!
God bless you. My prayers are with you as well.
Jewell
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
Comment from steevie
The imagery or metaphor if you will, pertaining to your life as puzzle pieces is effective and carries along your message very well.
Yes, in the course of our lives we often mispalce a few pieces of our puzzle, but like you said, its easier to see missing pieces in others.
Of course that is known as the mirror affect. We only truly see ourselves when we look into our own 'mirror of truth' and sometimes its not very often.
I loved this powm, Jan. Its so truthful and accurate.
It was a pleasure to read this fine write.
take care
steve
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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The imagery or metaphor if you will, pertaining to your life as puzzle pieces is effective and carries along your message very well.
Yes, in the course of our lives we often mispalce a few pieces of our puzzle, but like you said, its easier to see missing pieces in others.
Of course that is known as the mirror affect. We only truly see ourselves when we look into our own 'mirror of truth' and sometimes its not very often.
I loved this powm, Jan. Its so truthful and accurate.
It was a pleasure to read this fine write.
take care
steve
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
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you're never late, Jan, just early for the next time
smiles
steve
Comment from mumsyone
how often, Lord,
do we do the same
with those who take too long
to reassemble fractured lives -
instead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up
A great "puzzle" poem, Jan, with good artwork to complement it.
Hugs,
Lois
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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how often, Lord,
do we do the same
with those who take too long
to reassemble fractured lives -
instead of being Jesus for them
we leave them for Satan's curbside pick-up
A great "puzzle" poem, Jan, with good artwork to complement it.
Hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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thanks for reading. sorry I am so late responding. love, jan
