Comment from VICTIMEYES

Excellent

i was loving this one and how it ended and when you said flowing together melting into the most happy smile, that is a really great phrase and good image.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006

thank you so much
glad you're enjoying the book! :-)

Comment from angel of the quill

Excellent

The roses stopped to wither His look could never do
He was totally In love with every thing she would share Too
He loved her with Passion she loved him with the same of this
They had so many tender moments Of just plain loves holding kiss
It is written here with in A man's view of his love
I say that even they feel If they allow from heaven above
I think to find someone who is free is the most blessed gift of all
Does not matter the package short fat lean or tall
It is the hearts pure sharing Male female or even pet
I think I must have found love In every Poem yet
I do not say it is not found Out side the package shown
I just say maybe one day Love will follow me home

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006

thank you so much for another wonderful review! :-)

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

The connecting of soul mates with love and lust is an exciting and explosive combination. You have given it softness, and geltleness along with the heat it creates. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006

thank you lots and lots :-)

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

Very descriptive dots ! LOL, Is very good and yet it can be even better, you did this one a bit to eagerly fast . But it is effective never the less. I jus know you are capable of even more !

"their souls
flowing together
melting
into
the
most happy
smile"

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2005

Comment from CarolinasAngel

Excellent

This isn't one of your best. But it's still a great poem. I didn't much care for this part..
they
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with more
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that is
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indescribable

But hey.. That's just my opinion. It's still a great poem and deserves a 5 star. Well done as always Shelley.

Write on...
:O) Candy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

You've passed my challenge with all honors, all goodness of your creativity. You're a distinguished poet and so with your treasure of imagination my challenge has become a nice romantic poem of "you" and "I". I gladly accept it with all possible glee. You have made it great in giving the title "indescribable" and your "indescribable" gaps are more descriptive than lines of some those words.
A little suggestion my friend ~
The last stanza if you read like this.....
" their smiles
flowing together
melting
into
one
most happy
soul " .... how do you like it? LOL :o) Gautam

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

The chalenge of the buds and dust
Enough to make a person bust
But you instead have risen high
And wrote a poem worth a sigh

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2005