Animated Stills
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Take a Bough"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from BeasPeas
Humorous, original, unpretentious. Imaginative concept successful in message in just a few words. Your photograph of unusual tree is amazing.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Humorous, original, unpretentious. Imaginative concept successful in message in just a few words. Your photograph of unusual tree is amazing.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Thank you BeasPeas. Glad you liked it. So far not doing too well in the contest.
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Your piece was fun and imaginative. Don't give up. Just keep on writing and entering. Happy New Year!
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. The tree certainly has junk in the trunk.It looks like the tree is sitting down, maybe enjoying the shade of his friends. I love seeing oddities like this. Great work.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. The tree certainly has junk in the trunk.It looks like the tree is sitting down, maybe enjoying the shade of his friends. I love seeing oddities like this. Great work.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Thanks elliejean. So far it hasn't received a single vote.
Comment from Jane Johnson
So cute! Such a weird tree with junk in the trunk. Good use of syllables. I love the artwork you chose and/or maybe the artwork chose you. Anyway. Good flow of words and it made sense. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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So cute! Such a weird tree with junk in the trunk. Good use of syllables. I love the artwork you chose and/or maybe the artwork chose you. Anyway. Good flow of words and it made sense. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Thank you Jane, nice review.
Comment from RYME4U
Very clever analagy ...tree/mooning. The picture is amazing. Wonder what kind of growth that is. It looks just like a wrinkled old derrierre. Clevere title, too
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Very clever analagy ...tree/mooning. The picture is amazing. Wonder what kind of growth that is. It looks just like a wrinkled old derrierre. Clevere title, too
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Glad you enjoyed it. I smile!
Comment from poesyapprentice
I must admit it is clever. Junk in the TRUNK, ha ha! Mooned is clever too, but I'm not sure it looks like a booty. When I first saw the pic I thought the piece was going to be about another body part, lol. Then you would have had another kind of "woody" humor. ; ) You may have a winner here. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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I must admit it is clever. Junk in the TRUNK, ha ha! Mooned is clever too, but I'm not sure it looks like a booty. When I first saw the pic I thought the piece was going to be about another body part, lol. Then you would have had another kind of "woody" humor. ; ) You may have a winner here. Good luck!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Thank you. Smile :-))
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Yw : )
Comment from swirlyla_ila
Hahahaha! Loved your poem. It's hard to work with a 1-9-1 and you've done it beautifully and skilfully. The picture was great. But the only thing lacking for me was the use of the word "mooned". I did not quite get what that was supposed to mean. Still- keep writing. Looking forward to your next poem!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Hahahaha! Loved your poem. It's hard to work with a 1-9-1 and you've done it beautifully and skilfully. The picture was great. But the only thing lacking for me was the use of the word "mooned". I did not quite get what that was supposed to mean. Still- keep writing. Looking forward to your next poem!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2012
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Ah, when people flash their butt cheeks, it is known as being "mooned" in American slang.
