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Life is like a flower; water it and it will grow!
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Comment from
JM daSilva
I think it get it. Earthquake, violence, suffering, nobody to blame, but life itself?
as they (are) trapped under rocks.
came rushing (to) the spot,
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
I thank you for your kind words...
Comment from
hollyinvesuvianite
This is a powerful piece of writing! Very vivid and stark imagery that is haunting, sad and gruesome. A very emotional piece and great commentary on society and the wars and conflicts that take so many lives so unnecessarily. I can only advise that for a 5-7-5 contest, the poem should be three lines and with a syllable count of five for the first line, seven for the second line and five for the last line. Hope this helps. Great work and keep it up! Holly
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
Many, Many thanks for taking the time to read and addressing me back. Your words are true and sincere; I will take your advice and sour like an eagle.
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