Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Star (Tetractys Poem)"Small and Specialty Poems
6 total reviews
Comment from mystery poet
The world will never be dark so long as God shines
His star of Bethlehem for all living to see. I love
the presentation, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing
this tetracytys form. Like to see this as a contest
style of write.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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The world will never be dark so long as God shines
His star of Bethlehem for all living to see. I love
the presentation, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing
this tetracytys form. Like to see this as a contest
style of write.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2012
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Thanks mystery. It was a couple weeks ago..
Comment from Deorre Leonard
The Star.... I like this what a beautiful short but nicely written poem. Your light will shine in the darkness you will glow forever. Merry Christmas.. Deorre
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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The Star.... I like this what a beautiful short but nicely written poem. Your light will shine in the darkness you will glow forever. Merry Christmas.. Deorre
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review, and generous 6 stars.
Comment from mchapman
How wonderful you decided to write another tetratys form of poetry. The format is perfect and the imagery is evident in the words you have written. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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How wonderful you decided to write another tetratys form of poetry. The format is perfect and the imagery is evident in the words you have written. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you, such a nice review.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
A lovely Tetractys poem in the Christmas spirit. Great job. Love the picture. All you need is snow and a warm fire. Hope you are enjoying the holiday.
Robin Gilmor
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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A lovely Tetractys poem in the Christmas spirit. Great job. Love the picture. All you need is snow and a warm fire. Hope you are enjoying the holiday.
Robin Gilmor
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you Robin, this was a fun little format. Holiday Cheer to you!
Comment from sunnilicious
General thought, but that came out nice. So you followed the format and stuck to a theme, which just happens to be spiritual and Christmas. Go figure. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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General thought, but that came out nice. So you followed the format and stuck to a theme, which just happens to be spiritual and Christmas. Go figure. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thanks you sunnilicious for the review and Holiday Wishes.
Comment from Folorunsho obalugemo
Splendid write. The "e" in Devine, meseems, should be "i", as in Divine.
Altogether this is a most sparkling work, where the author seeks to capture the eminence of Christ's purpose, through his birth, death and resurrection--which is the star shining in the darkness of the world's sin, occasioned by man's fall from grace to grass, from Eden to an accursed state of affairs .
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Splendid write. The "e" in Devine, meseems, should be "i", as in Divine.
Altogether this is a most sparkling work, where the author seeks to capture the eminence of Christ's purpose, through his birth, death and resurrection--which is the star shining in the darkness of the world's sin, occasioned by man's fall from grace to grass, from Eden to an accursed state of affairs .
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the review. I'll fix that.
