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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, bill, you did an excellent job writing this short story about the two sisters that attack each other verbally in the mall food court. i enjoyed reading it

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    Thank you.