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Comment from rod007
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This is an excellent rendition of the diversity of nature. It holds powerful symbolism of the diversity of mankind with their different religions and races. We all should embrace each other in peace. Well done, keep up the great writing my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
    Your review is inspiring. Thank you.
Comment from Lovinia
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A delightful poem about one of my favorite seasons. Autumn/Fall in all its resplendent color is certainly "Nature's lesson of Diversity". Your photograph highlighting the "jumbled array" and "mixed display"

Great rhythm and excellent rhyme in your little set of couplets echoing the palette of the season you describe with lovely imagery.

A noble message 'hidden' within the lines ... the beauty and glory of change, and our differences on display can combine in the harmony of life.

I enjoyed your fine poem. Warm Regards - :) Lovinia

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
    Very impressive review. Than you so much.
reply by Lovinia on 10-Dec-2012
    My pleasure. Thank you for your lovely poem. Warm Regards - :) Lovi xo
Comment from EMB
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And I'm going to take it that the lesson is pertaining to how beautiful and "natural" diversity can be. (Or something close to that notion.) This is a fine poem with a very important message, my friend.

Excellent work.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    You perceptions are greatly appreciated Edward.
Comment from sunnilicious
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Wonderful couplet poem. Well thought out narrative in a poem. Good unwritten analogy to life. Nicely written. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much, Sunni
Comment from clsandau
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A pretty little poem about my favorite time of year. When we mixed the fallen leaves all together, they can be very beautiful. However, we've gone past that now and into winter wonderland. Nice set up on your poem. Thanks and smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    Thank you Carol.
Comment from jb wade
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What a nice thought. We seem to take the beauty of fall for granted. Thanks for reminding us to appreciate what is before us. I enjoyed reading your work.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    Thank you
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend there is so much beauty in the autumn leaves even when they fall from the trees they make a collage of colour well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2012
    Thank you Jill.
Comment from dancerwriter
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What a beautiful phrase "Natures Lesson of Diversity", and how true.Where I live in Northern Australia we miss this beautiful part of the seasons.Lovely words with a magnificent picture and clever background colour to enhance it.Lesley.J.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
    I appreciate your kind review all the from down under. Thanks for the visit.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
    I appreciate your kind review all the from down under. Thanks for the visit.
Comment from mystery poet
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Your illustration in this piece brought the
story of the twelve tribes of Israel to mind.
I will have to turn to it for certain but,
one son mixed his herds and became very prosperous.
The other sons animals grew sickly, weak and died.
Thus, your beautiful pic of leaves from many
type trees...

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
    A beautiful review. Thanks so much
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
    A beautiful review. Thanks so much
reply by mystery poet on 08-Dec-2012
    Thanks and an honor to have shared it
    with you.
reply by mystery poet on 08-Dec-2012
    :}lol!
    Hugs......