Pray
We all should bow only before God and ask Him what we want.2 total reviews
Comment from EMB
This is a nice poem about prayer. However, it's in the wrong contest because it's not a 5-7-5 format. You need to either shorten the syllable count or find another contest to enter this poem.
Still, a nice poem.
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This is a nice poem about prayer. However, it's in the wrong contest because it's not a 5-7-5 format. You need to either shorten the syllable count or find another contest to enter this poem.
Still, a nice poem.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
Comment from Rondeno
As you know as well as I do, "Islam" means "submission". This gives your poem an extra layer of meaning, and added depth of devotion.
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As you know as well as I do, "Islam" means "submission". This gives your poem an extra layer of meaning, and added depth of devotion.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
