Diamond Beauty
Life without the letter S contest entry.28 total reviews
Comment from kxlot79
Beautiful.
I can certainly see why it made the All Time Best list.
Vivid images, fluid prose, and universal. All the makings of a good poem, and everything writers strive to achieve in one little ditty.
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2013
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Beautiful.
I can certainly see why it made the All Time Best list.
Vivid images, fluid prose, and universal. All the makings of a good poem, and everything writers strive to achieve in one little ditty.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2013
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kxlot79 ~
Thank you! I have to say, this one is one of my favorites! :)
DMB
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Looking at the moon in any of its phases enhances or evokes so many feelings in onlookers. Your poem effectively describs the sweet thoughts you have while gazing at the moon.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Looking at the moon in any of its phases enhances or evokes so many feelings in onlookers. Your poem effectively describs the sweet thoughts you have while gazing at the moon.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the wonderful review. :)
Comment from Thomas Raine
Your love comes across clearly, and I enjoyed this line:
"Radiant you glow"
for its simplistic beauty and admiration of the one you speak of. Being in love is a wonderful feeling, enjoy every moment of it,
- TR
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Your love comes across clearly, and I enjoyed this line:
"Radiant you glow"
for its simplistic beauty and admiration of the one you speak of. Being in love is a wonderful feeling, enjoy every moment of it,
- TR
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
Excellent job sticking to the contest rules. I like the use of the anaphoric technique. The ending rhymes of each stanza along with this technique, really help to unify the poem.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Excellent job sticking to the contest rules. I like the use of the anaphoric technique. The ending rhymes of each stanza along with this technique, really help to unify the poem.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the kind review and rating. I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. :)
Comment from Angels27
A lovely contest entry. The lines flow so smoothly that you forget you do not have the letter S contained in it. If only we can recall the magic moments that hold us together...life would be so meaningful.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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A lovely contest entry. The lines flow so smoothly that you forget you do not have the letter S contained in it. If only we can recall the magic moments that hold us together...life would be so meaningful.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from Kingsland
This poem presents good thoughts in a romantic provisions of poetic pulchritude. I was sure I could spell that word correctly. This was a very pleasant piece of poetic art to have read... John
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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This poem presents good thoughts in a romantic provisions of poetic pulchritude. I was sure I could spell that word correctly. This was a very pleasant piece of poetic art to have read... John
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from Starlit Ink
Your soft and delicate poem has imagery of nature and much emotion. It speaks of a great fondness for that special someone. How great to think of someone as such a radiant treasure. I enjoyed the read. :)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Your soft and delicate poem has imagery of nature and much emotion. It speaks of a great fondness for that special someone. How great to think of someone as such a radiant treasure. I enjoyed the read. :)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. You are in love if she outshines the moon. Love grows, even after she quits taking your breath away. Great work.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. You are in love if she outshines the moon. Love grows, even after she quits taking your breath away. Great work.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a lovely piece. How lucky your significant other is to have you write about them like this. I loved the picture as it is very calming. The use of the word breath taking is wonderful. Nice job.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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What a lovely piece. How lucky your significant other is to have you write about them like this. I loved the picture as it is very calming. The use of the word breath taking is wonderful. Nice job.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :)
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely photo to go with poem without the letter "S." Just love the way "moon" is tied into your poem and compared to
"...being together." Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Lovely photo to go with poem without the letter "S." Just love the way "moon" is tied into your poem and compared to
"...being together." Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind words. I'm very glad you like it! :)
