Buterflies
wonderfull and happy2 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
"are nature treasures
with the wonderful colors
soars high with the wind."
you can't really use the title as the first word. and in the third line it probably should be soar not soars?
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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"are nature treasures
with the wonderful colors
soars high with the wind."
you can't really use the title as the first word. and in the third line it probably should be soar not soars?
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
Comment from Glasstruth
A beautiful haiku. Your 5-7-5 is right on with the count. It flows well with the colors and in the wind your poem soars high. Great job! Les
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A beautiful haiku. Your 5-7-5 is right on with the count. It flows well with the colors and in the wind your poem soars high. Great job! Les
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
