The Sound Of The Forest
A relaxing walk through the woods.2 total reviews
Comment from phill doran
Hello there
I am afraid you have misunderstood the rules of a 5-7-5-
1st line 5 syllables "ONE WORD MAY-BE TWO"
2nd line 7 syllables "OR MORE SYL-LAB-LES THEY ARE"
3rd line 5 syllables "SOUND UN-ITS OF WORDS"
Are you with me?
You might want to re-think this as an entry - maybe put it to one side and use in another contest, but as a 5-7-5 it will not be considered I think.
I wish you well
Cheers
phill
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Hello there
I am afraid you have misunderstood the rules of a 5-7-5-
1st line 5 syllables "ONE WORD MAY-BE TWO"
2nd line 7 syllables "OR MORE SYL-LAB-LES THEY ARE"
3rd line 5 syllables "SOUND UN-ITS OF WORDS"
Are you with me?
You might want to re-think this as an entry - maybe put it to one side and use in another contest, but as a 5-7-5 it will not be considered I think.
I wish you well
Cheers
phill
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thankyou for pointing that out :) iwas in such a rush that I didn't even notice :D thank you for your feedback!
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like this piece of brief poetry that usually tells a story that is longer than the poem itself. However, this one does not conform to the 5-7-5 format. Count the syllables carefully. cheers
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I like this piece of brief poetry that usually tells a story that is longer than the poem itself. However, this one does not conform to the 5-7-5 format. Count the syllables carefully. cheers
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
