All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 " One Pure Note"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the author notes. We don't really appreciate happiness until we know despair. The right view can change our mood. Look at anything with a eye for the bad. You will find bad in everything. Look at anything with a eye for beauty and hope. You will find comfort. Great work.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the author notes. We don't really appreciate happiness until we know despair. The right view can change our mood. Look at anything with a eye for the bad. You will find bad in everything. Look at anything with a eye for beauty and hope. You will find comfort. Great work.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Bless you, elliejean! I won with this one - I'm happy about that! :)) Sharyn
Comment from Littlegirl38732
This is a beautiful poem, and I can relate to it.for sure. Though my happiness at the bottom of my abyss has not been found on an ocean, but in the hearts of kind people in my community. My husband got.laid off from a fourteen year job because our son was sick so often with asthma complications. In and out of the hospital. We have six together and two step children that are his from a previous marriage. Things are expensive now and he only got a minimum wage job after so many years of us having it all and hitting rock bottom. But a sweet lady we don't really even know that well, handed my children a hundred dollar gift card. This gave me so much hope that I just know everything will be alright! Finally getting the strength to put up the tree! (: best wishes and Merry Christmas!!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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This is a beautiful poem, and I can relate to it.for sure. Though my happiness at the bottom of my abyss has not been found on an ocean, but in the hearts of kind people in my community. My husband got.laid off from a fourteen year job because our son was sick so often with asthma complications. In and out of the hospital. We have six together and two step children that are his from a previous marriage. Things are expensive now and he only got a minimum wage job after so many years of us having it all and hitting rock bottom. But a sweet lady we don't really even know that well, handed my children a hundred dollar gift card. This gave me so much hope that I just know everything will be alright! Finally getting the strength to put up the tree! (: best wishes and Merry Christmas!!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Often it's just recognizing that ray of hope, Lg - blessings, and bless the lovely lady who gave it to you! :) Sharyn
Comment from Auroraboreal800
It was very sad at the beginning, but it turn out to be a very hopeful poem, a real powerful uplifting that cheers lonely hearts.
GOOD JOB!!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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It was very sad at the beginning, but it turn out to be a very hopeful poem, a real powerful uplifting that cheers lonely hearts.
GOOD JOB!!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thx so much Ab! :) Sharyn
Comment from Angels27
Very true. The value of upliftment can be enjoyed after the depths of despair. The loneliness and pain in the starting few lines...gradually convert into so much positivity. Great contest entry.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Very true. The value of upliftment can be enjoyed after the depths of despair. The loneliness and pain in the starting few lines...gradually convert into so much positivity. Great contest entry.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thx so much Angels - I won! yeah! :) Sharyn
Comment from misscookie
I love theartywork
Itis perfect for your poem it sets the mood all the way.
I love how you express the emotions within and how a song release all the lonelyness and pain.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I love theartywork
Itis perfect for your poem it sets the mood all the way.
I love how you express the emotions within and how a song release all the lonelyness and pain.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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bless you misscookie! I won with this one - yeah! :) Sharyn
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Good job, take care.
Comment from smudge
It is a very uplifting poem throughout the use of contrast. My favorite lines are, "Strands of warm golds high skies and treasured birds of white grace."
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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It is a very uplifting poem throughout the use of contrast. My favorite lines are, "Strands of warm golds high skies and treasured birds of white grace."
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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and another thank you my dear! :) Sharyn (I won, so entry is no longer "blind")
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Despare certainly at the beginning
of this exchange. Then the light
shines through the quagmire of the
real world and brings joy and hope.
A very readable poem which is easy
to understand. The picture suggests
the aftermath. Good work. Eric
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Despare certainly at the beginning
of this exchange. Then the light
shines through the quagmire of the
real world and brings joy and hope.
A very readable poem which is easy
to understand. The picture suggests
the aftermath. Good work. Eric
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx again, Eric - I won with this one! yeah! :) Sharyn
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I really like this 'but then I hear on ocean's frigid air
someone singing joy
high and pure enough
to crack the classic chandelier,
like a finger running round the rim
of sparkling crystal glass
in sunlight, and as those notes float
around me, I know
happiness'. you brought color and visual design to this work which enhanced the beauty. You actually created a visual chandelier with your design. Good work.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I really like this 'but then I hear on ocean's frigid air
someone singing joy
high and pure enough
to crack the classic chandelier,
like a finger running round the rim
of sparkling crystal glass
in sunlight, and as those notes float
around me, I know
happiness'. you brought color and visual design to this work which enhanced the beauty. You actually created a visual chandelier with your design. Good work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Blessings to you, Ola! what a beautiful review!
:) Sharyn
Comment from Mike Momba
A lot of thought has been vested into this poem. i see riching in imagination and command of words and imagery. However i did really grasp the concept. it seemed buried under flowery language and imagery
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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A lot of thought has been vested into this poem. i see riching in imagination and command of words and imagery. However i did really grasp the concept. it seemed buried under flowery language and imagery
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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guess you're the only one who didn't grasp the concept Mike :)
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant piece of poetry! and i agree despair first and then hope is quite the opposites.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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this is a brilliant piece of poetry! and i agree despair first and then hope is quite the opposites.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thank you so much rebekka!
