My World, Muted
An acrostic about life with multiple sclerosis (MS).6 total reviews
Comment from Rondeno
Magnificent. It was one thing to accomplish a rather difficult acrostic poem, but you have done far more. This is a very eloquent and moving lament.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Magnificent. It was one thing to accomplish a rather difficult acrostic poem, but you have done far more. This is a very eloquent and moving lament.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Curly Girly
This is such a terrible disease. It affects so many people. Your description of it is so vivid. I think that you have done an excellent job here. CG
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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This is such a terrible disease. It affects so many people. Your description of it is so vivid. I think that you have done an excellent job here. CG
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you. You are very kind.
Comment from Treischel
Impressive example of the Nonet format in the difficult length of the two words Multiple Sclerosis spun out in meaningful, touching, soulful poetic freeform verse. You share the experience, the struggle, the resignation, the grayness. Overpowering, emotional triumph!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Impressive example of the Nonet format in the difficult length of the two words Multiple Sclerosis spun out in meaningful, touching, soulful poetic freeform verse. You share the experience, the struggle, the resignation, the grayness. Overpowering, emotional triumph!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you. I administer a support group, so have much to write about.
Comment from Gungalo
A wonderful write in acrostic format. Your words, multiple sclerosis, gave you an excellent grasp of things. Awesome girl.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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A wonderful write in acrostic format. Your words, multiple sclerosis, gave you an excellent grasp of things. Awesome girl.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thanks very much!
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Smile.
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OK :)
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Smile.
Comment from Selina Stambi
This is an incredibly beautiful, haunting, poignant poem.
The courage and the bravery of the sufferer shine through.
Masterfully crated.
Bless you and I hope you win, Kit.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012
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This is an incredibly beautiful, haunting, poignant poem.
The courage and the bravery of the sufferer shine through.
Masterfully crated.
Bless you and I hope you win, Kit.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012
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Thank you very much. Words help me to live with this disease. For a long time, MS kept me from finding words, but they are slowly returning. :)
Comment from mermaids
Excellent acrostic form that expresses well your emotions in coping with this illness. I love the line I worked,ran, danced,sang, made love,held my child, my heart. You remind us not to take life for granted.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012
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Excellent acrostic form that expresses well your emotions in coping with this illness. I love the line I worked,ran, danced,sang, made love,held my child, my heart. You remind us not to take life for granted.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012
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Thank you. I am living for a cure, and will see one!
