Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello Treischel...Wow!!! I have to admit this was very well written, but it wasn't funny especially with your explicit notes.
I'm very sorry for you and your sister's loss Treischel. Cheers and my kindest regards to you and your family.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012

Thanks Beja in for your revie and kind words.

Comment from elliejean

Excellent

I love the picture. It looks like a crashed motorcycle. I Like the epitaph. The man fulfilled his need for speed. But I bet you he didn't look any better than the motorcycle. Great work.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012

Thank you for the nice review, elliejean

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

I always enjoy this contest. Your epithaph is witty and paints quite a picture. Good luck in the contest! Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012

Thank you Bev for the nice review.

reply by Writingfundimension on 23-Nov-2012

You're very welcome!

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Sorry to hear about your brother-in-law; a horrible way to die. A good, witty epitaph, though, with mono-rhyme. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2012

Thanks for the kind words and wishes.