Sad Santa
Why is Santa Sad?91 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
what a delightful poem, Sandra..
the content, the flow to the
words, and to both rhythm and
rhyme, all excellent.
most impressive, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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what a delightful poem, Sandra..
the content, the flow to the
words, and to both rhythm and
rhyme, all excellent.
most impressive, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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What a lovely review, thank you so much, Margaret! I am delighted you enjoyed my poem, thank you! xsx Sandra
Comment from pattipac
I love your child's poem of the meaning of Christmas. All too often parents fell to convey the true meaning of Christmas to their children. Your couplets make your well worded poem flow.
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I love your child's poem of the meaning of Christmas. All too often parents fell to convey the true meaning of Christmas to their children. Your couplets make your well worded poem flow.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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What a lovely review, pattipac, thank you so very much! I am really delighted you enjoyed my poem, and thank you for awarding it the 6 stars!! That is so kind of you, thank you! xsx Sandra
Comment from prayingpoet
Enjoyed this poem very much. The flow was great and would be easy to read to children. I liked the way you brought Jesus into the story and yet kept the fun of Christmas presents and even fairies. Nicely done!
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Enjoyed this poem very much. The flow was great and would be easy to read to children. I liked the way you brought Jesus into the story and yet kept the fun of Christmas presents and even fairies. Nicely done!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you!! What a lovely review! I am really pleased you enjoyed it, thank you. xsx Sandra
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a nice way to tell children the true meaning of Christmas with out ruining the myth of Santa. I liked the rhyming and the flow was great. The story flowed as well as the meter. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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What a nice way to tell children the true meaning of Christmas with out ruining the myth of Santa. I liked the rhyming and the flow was great. The story flowed as well as the meter. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you again for another lovely review! Children's poetry is my favourite, I just love writing them, I am glad you enjoyed this one as well! xsx Sandra
Comment from Angels27
How sweet..! This poem reaches out in such simple subtle way. Extremely valid observation. Our kids must understand the true meaning of Christmas. Very beautiful rhyme scheme.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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How sweet..! This poem reaches out in such simple subtle way. Extremely valid observation. Our kids must understand the true meaning of Christmas. Very beautiful rhyme scheme.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, Anges27, for your really lovely review! I am so pleased you enjoyed it, I will be testing it on my granddaughter tonight, fingers crossed she likes it! xsx Sandra
Comment from LScribeHarris
Cute little poem for children about the roots of Christmas.
A few punctuation nitpicks:
smile. <-- needs ending quotes
Toy! <--needs ending quotes
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Cute little poem for children about the roots of Christmas.
A few punctuation nitpicks:
smile. <-- needs ending quotes
Toy! <--needs ending quotes
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Well, you are the only one who has picked up my, oh so obvious, punctuation misses, and that includes me!! Thank you so very much for being helpful in my review, I really appreciate it, thank you. (I have put in the missing culprits!) I am pleased you still liked it! xsx Sandra
Comment from Cedar
This is such a beautiful Christmas poem for the children. I love your story and how well it progresses along with perfect rhyme and flow. This should be published in a book of poems for children. If you had entered this in a contest, it surely would have won. A perfect Christmas poem, therefore, I had to give it a six star rating. Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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This is such a beautiful Christmas poem for the children. I love your story and how well it progresses along with perfect rhyme and flow. This should be published in a book of poems for children. If you had entered this in a contest, it surely would have won. A perfect Christmas poem, therefore, I had to give it a six star rating. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, Bill, for this really wonderful review! What a lovely compliment you have paid my writing, thank you so very much. And thank you also for awarding it the 6 star rating too! I am delighted you enjoyed it. xsx Sandra
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi sandramitchell,
This is such a beautiful poem. I loved every line and what a sweet way of letting children know the real meaning of Christmas. Your lines flow nicely and the meaning is clear. It is a pleasure to have read and reviewed. Thank you for sharing this delightful read.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Hi sandramitchell,
This is such a beautiful poem. I loved every line and what a sweet way of letting children know the real meaning of Christmas. Your lines flow nicely and the meaning is clear. It is a pleasure to have read and reviewed. Thank you for sharing this delightful read.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you so very much for this amazing review and for the super 6 stars!!! What a lovely review, thank you, I am really pleased you enjoyed the poem! :) xsx Sandra
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Your most welcome. Your poem reminded me of when my children were small. Each year I had a cake make in honor of Jesus Birthday and I would explain why we celebrated Christmas. Now I do this for my grandchildren. It has become an honored tradition within our family. Thank you for sharing your view.
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That is a beautiful tradition, how wonderful for your grandchildren to have you for their grandma. The Birthday cake made specially for Jesus birthday makes it even more special. Sounds so much better than Christmas Cake, the translation of Christmas cake,is not to clear for little ones, but a Birthday cake is! xsx
Comment from Glasstruth
The fairy comes tp remind the children what Christmas is for by asking instead of telling, and the answer is found. The rhyming and flow is just perfect. I think children would be interested in this. Well written. Lees
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The fairy comes tp remind the children what Christmas is for by asking instead of telling, and the answer is found. The rhyming and flow is just perfect. I think children would be interested in this. Well written. Lees
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much, Lees, for such a lovely review! I am pleased you enjoyed it, and I do hope children will! Thank you.xsx Sandra.
Comment from c_lucas
The History of the creation of Christmas is not as fun-filled of the creation of the smiles on children faces on Christmas Day. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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The History of the creation of Christmas is not as fun-filled of the creation of the smiles on children faces on Christmas Day. This is very well written.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012
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The childrens sparkling smiles and to see their joy is something I would never trade. Christmas is all that and more. Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I am glad you liked it!! xsx
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You're welcome,Sandra. Charlie
