White in a Green Man's World
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Comment from Dollie Mason
This is interesting and well written. I didnt realize this was possibl and I thought Michael Jackson tried to be a white man, but failed. Thisis so sad and I feel bad thinking such horrible thoughts. good writing.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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This is interesting and well written. I didnt realize this was possibl and I thought Michael Jackson tried to be a white man, but failed. Thisis so sad and I feel bad thinking such horrible thoughts. good writing.
dm
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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He really did suffer from both the disease and the judgement. Google it. I was appreciative but not a fan. It is an interesting subject to ponder on.
Comment from ocruickshank
I think using race as a topic is really tricky although the author attempts to down play this w red, green, and yellow skin colors except when comparing yellow to Asians. I'm both inspired and outraged. I love the idea of modifying skin color for a science article but dislike the insensitivity.... Conclusion is also spelled wrong.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I think using race as a topic is really tricky although the author attempts to down play this w red, green, and yellow skin colors except when comparing yellow to Asians. I'm both inspired and outraged. I love the idea of modifying skin color for a science article but dislike the insensitivity.... Conclusion is also spelled wrong.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I'm sorry you feel that way, but make no apologies for this tongue-in-cheek swipe at racial issues. The reason it was easy to identify Asians as the yellow race is that the average American has no idea what the debt to China is and prefers to polka around their own dosey-do and live alone without appreciating the cost of being a minority...anywhere.
Thanks for reading.
