Where Men Shouldn't Wander
The sequel to 'Too Close for Comfort'45 total reviews
Comment from Cedar
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has such a great bounce to it. Your rhyming and flow are both perfect. The story you tell is very interesting as well. Have you ever tried your luck with "limericks"? Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It has such a great bounce to it. Your rhyming and flow are both perfect. The story you tell is very interesting as well. Have you ever tried your luck with "limericks"? Great job. Bill
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I've never tried a limerick. I'll have to one of these days. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from artemis53
great piece, Cindy. I love the tale and the lesson that comes with it. There are some things we need not delve into for our own sake.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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great piece, Cindy. I love the tale and the lesson that comes with it. There are some things we need not delve into for our own sake.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I agree, it's smarter to leave those little guys alone. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Littlegirl38732
Very cute! My daughters and I love fairy stuff! I liked too close for comfort too but this one is my favorite! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Very cute! My daughters and I love fairy stuff! I liked too close for comfort too but this one is my favorite! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and Too Close For Comfort as well. Thanks for the stars and the kind words.
Comment from Oldsteamer
You have a great poem here strung together with a lot of quatrains.
There's a lot of good imaginative work .
The title threw me off in as much as I thought it was about wandering men.
I guess in a way it's still is. Planning, scheming and getting caught.
Turning into an ass.
Very enjoyable.
Regards,
- R -
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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You have a great poem here strung together with a lot of quatrains.
There's a lot of good imaginative work .
The title threw me off in as much as I thought it was about wandering men.
I guess in a way it's still is. Planning, scheming and getting caught.
Turning into an ass.
Very enjoyable.
Regards,
- R -
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you got a kick out of it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from misscookie
Oh how ii love this cvute little poem
and the wise message that it brings.
You had myattention from the first line to the last. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Oh how ii love this cvute little poem
and the wise message that it brings.
You had myattention from the first line to the last. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and the great review.
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Your very welcome,have a nice day.
Comment from Curly Girly
A clever and well thought out story-poem. I enjoyed it. I found the idea quite novel and entertaining. Well done with this, I wish you all the best. A true delight to entertain! CG
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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A clever and well thought out story-poem. I enjoyed it. I found the idea quite novel and entertaining. Well done with this, I wish you all the best. A true delight to entertain! CG
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and the great review.
Comment from Humbly K
A great poem to read from start to finish, fully grabbing the readers attention. An interesting opening that draws the reader in. Well flowing rhymes which I liked, a good rhythm overall.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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A great poem to read from start to finish, fully grabbing the readers attention. An interesting opening that draws the reader in. Well flowing rhymes which I liked, a good rhythm overall.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and the great review.
Comment from DMCranfield
Excellent poem! Very fun and whimsical.
Great cadence, it flows very smoothly and nicely. It was a great read for people of almost any age.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Excellent poem! Very fun and whimsical.
Great cadence, it flows very smoothly and nicely. It was a great read for people of almost any age.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it fun. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This seems to be a tale of warning. Don't mess with the fairies. I like the way you wove a story through your stanzas. The flow was great. Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This seems to be a tale of warning. Don't mess with the fairies. I like the way you wove a story through your stanzas. The flow was great. Nice job.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I understand it's not wise to make them mad. LOL Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Ekim777
An intriguing fairy tale. Most humans are clumsy in their thinking, the conclusions and their actions which sometimes work for them but these brothers were confronting something more vast. Those fairies wielded the lights of true understanding through the darkness that envelopes and lies within us. Our flashes of intuition, so much more profound than our Euclidean intellects; has often in legend been likened to glowing lights. They represent a wisdom born from the bowels of the earth or from the dark skies. If man's understanding stems from the masculine ego consciousness, the intuitive understanding is something feminine. In light of all this, our poet has created a fine poem. -Ekim777
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An intriguing fairy tale. Most humans are clumsy in their thinking, the conclusions and their actions which sometimes work for them but these brothers were confronting something more vast. Those fairies wielded the lights of true understanding through the darkness that envelopes and lies within us. Our flashes of intuition, so much more profound than our Euclidean intellects; has often in legend been likened to glowing lights. They represent a wisdom born from the bowels of the earth or from the dark skies. If man's understanding stems from the masculine ego consciousness, the intuitive understanding is something feminine. In light of all this, our poet has created a fine poem. -Ekim777
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the stars and a most interesting review.
