Where Men Shouldn't Wander
The sequel to 'Too Close for Comfort'45 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Cindy Warren ....
What an amusing thought you have developed in this poem, unfolding for us your ideas as to what Fairies are capable of doing to those who trespass on their preserves.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for
sharing this with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Hullo Cindy Warren ....
What an amusing thought you have developed in this poem, unfolding for us your ideas as to what Fairies are capable of doing to those who trespass on their preserves.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I thank you for
sharing this with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Wow, six stars! Thanks! I'm thrilled you liked my poem so much. Those fairies can be nasty when someone tries to catch them. Thanks again for the six.
Comment from Janet Foor
This was a delightful read. I liked the pace and cadence throughout. Great picture to accompany your skillfully chosen words. I liked the ending best. Very clever and nicely done. Best wishes, Janet
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This was a delightful read. I liked the pace and cadence throughout. Great picture to accompany your skillfully chosen words. I liked the ending best. Very clever and nicely done. Best wishes, Janet
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The ending was the hardest. I had trouble deciding what their punishment should be for trying to catch fairies. Thanks for this wonderful review.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I'm sure you had good fun writing this one. I like the smooth run throughout the verses. Your rhyming scheme too is a delight for a work of that lenght. Good one
ola thomas
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm sure you had good fun writing this one. I like the smooth run throughout the verses. Your rhyming scheme too is a delight for a work of that lenght. Good one
ola thomas
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Yes, it was fun to write. I just had a little trouble deciding what their punishment should be for trying to catch fairies. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from ruzu27
What a great story about fairies, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Although it is a rather long poem, the reader is taken by what's happening to Ben and Blake.
It has got very good rhymes and is really fun to read.
Thank you for sharing.
:) Ruth
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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What a great story about fairies, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Although it is a rather long poem, the reader is taken by what's happening to Ben and Blake.
It has got very good rhymes and is really fun to read.
Thank you for sharing.
:) Ruth
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Titanx9
With its excellent rhyming and pacing, this poem will be a great hit with kids under 10, or even someone a bit older like me - lol. Too bad the boys messed with the fairies. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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With its excellent rhyming and pacing, this poem will be a great hit with kids under 10, or even someone a bit older like me - lol. Too bad the boys messed with the fairies. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I wrote it with my grandchildren in mind, but I'm glad the grownups are enjoying it too. Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review.
Comment from squid152
Great aabb quatrains. Those fairies can be a mess. If you try to catch them, you are in for a world of hurt. Just leave them alone.-Gary
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Great aabb quatrains. Those fairies can be a mess. If you try to catch them, you are in for a world of hurt. Just leave them alone.-Gary
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Yep, catching them is a bad idea. It was difficult coming up with a punishment for those two. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thenks for the great review.
Comment from mystery poet
This is an interesting tale about the fairy world.
They can be tiny villains when they get ticked off.
Pays to keep the slat cleared if you're dealing
with those pesky fairies. Great story and can teach
one a lesson...or two!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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This is an interesting tale about the fairy world.
They can be tiny villains when they get ticked off.
Pays to keep the slat cleared if you're dealing
with those pesky fairies. Great story and can teach
one a lesson...or two!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Those two kind of asked for trouble. It was unwise to try and capture fairies. Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for a wonderful review.
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It was all my pleasure!!!
Comment from fictionwriter
Cute little poem. I certainly wouldn't want to mess with those fairies. I guess those boys should have left well enough alone. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Cute little poem. I certainly wouldn't want to mess with those fairies. I guess those boys should have left well enough alone. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Yep, those fairies can get a little grouchy when you try to catch them with flypaper and put them in jars! Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Cornetist
I've never known any fairy to be so vengeful! They're usually very nice...at least the ones I've met. What was it that made poor Blake so ill? Were those fairies working some bad magic on him? Or was it just that he ate too many of those "funny" mushrooms...(you know the kind...they make your wheels spin!) Anyway...looks like you've learned your lesson..."Fairies are best left alone."
Fun read!
Cornetist
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I've never known any fairy to be so vengeful! They're usually very nice...at least the ones I've met. What was it that made poor Blake so ill? Were those fairies working some bad magic on him? Or was it just that he ate too many of those "funny" mushrooms...(you know the kind...they make your wheels spin!) Anyway...looks like you've learned your lesson..."Fairies are best left alone."
Fun read!
Cornetist
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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This was a sequel to 'Too Close for Comfort.' You're welcome to read it in my portfolio. The fairies had already given Blake a warning. They were mad because he and Ben came back to try and capture them. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Keeper Tony
An extremely well written piece of verse with some nice rhyhmes. As with so many poems that i read your talent is one to be admired. This was a pleasant read and i am glad i came across it.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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An extremely well written piece of verse with some nice rhyhmes. As with so many poems that i read your talent is one to be admired. This was a pleasant read and i am glad i came across it.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review.
