From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 " A Good Day Coming Through"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
59 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I love the message conveyed indoor
poem. It is very up-lifting.
Beautifully rhymed lines and smooth
flow.
Thanks for sharing your positive reflections.
Nancy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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I love the message conveyed indoor
poem. It is very up-lifting.
Beautifully rhymed lines and smooth
flow.
Thanks for sharing your positive reflections.
Nancy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much nancyjam for your wonderful review and stars. I am considering releasing all of the poems in my portfolio as a poetry book as they have all been under the title 'OUT OF THE GRAYNESS; I would sincerely, deeply appreciate any feedback you might offer if you would (at your leisure) have a look at my portfolio and reply? So many thanks for your always helpful responses to my works. Blessings always! Vance
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweetly and loving poem you have penned to help those that may be down and out as they read this. You used very lovely words and very nice imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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This is a very sweetly and loving poem you have penned to help those that may be down and out as they read this. You used very lovely words and very nice imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much Teri7 for your lovely review and generous stars, so very much appreciated.Please Stay tuned! Vance
Comment from jenintorre
'A good day coming through'. I really like that. Your poem is so positive and uplifting. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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'A good day coming through'. I really like that. Your poem is so positive and uplifting. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much Jen, for your lovely review and stars! Much appreciated and please stay tuned! Vance
Comment from heart of Lou
Life and light! We could all use some of that! Some people are so busy looking down and feeling sorry for themselves that I'm not sure they even know there is a sky out there to look up to. Good poem!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Life and light! We could all use some of that! Some people are so busy looking down and feeling sorry for themselves that I'm not sure they even know there is a sky out there to look up to. Good poem!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2018
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Wow Lou! So glad to meet you and ? your heart too!! Much appreciation for your lovely review and stars and hope you will stay tuned! all the best. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Ricky1024
A "Good Day Coming through."
And, the ground could drink
your Tears...
And, grow a flower from your Fears...
In a perfect world but today?
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Theme met Imagery finally in a cloud.
Adjective Content then cried out loud...
Grammar cried cause no errors came by...
As Objective Content went to the dance...
And as the angels sing...
"A little flower the Father doth bring...
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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A "Good Day Coming through."
And, the ground could drink
your Tears...
And, grow a flower from your Fears...
In a perfect world but today?
...
Theme met Imagery finally in a cloud.
Adjective Content then cried out loud...
Grammar cried cause no errors came by...
As Objective Content went to the dance...
And as the angels sing...
"A little flower the Father doth bring...
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Wow Ricky! Now That is a majestic review if I've ever seen one! And by golly, this is the first ever. Many thanks so much for this beautiful gesture and uplifting review! Blessings always! Vance
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Occasionally I review in the form of a poem.
Ricky...
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It seems that you do it often and I'm glad to get them always! Thanks! Vance
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
I really like your poem. I think people are not meant to live in sorrow and dispair and for dying when you are young. You did a great job with this. Well written.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Hello, my friend,
I really like your poem. I think people are not meant to live in sorrow and dispair and for dying when you are young. You did a great job with this. Well written.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much Gypsy Blue rose, for this really lovely and generous review! It's a joy to hear from you and know you enjoyed this ...my goal!...So please stay tuned and I will do my best to make you smile! Blessings always HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from tfawcus
A poem that could lift anyone out of the dumps! Splendid advice in this verse:
"Life's not meant for folks to live
In sorrow and despair
And life's not meant for dying when you're young
Everyday's a new beginning, a brand new melody
A song to sing that never has been sung"
We should take a leaf from the wisdom of the birds and keep singing - even in the depths of winter. Sometimes that is all that will pull us through.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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A poem that could lift anyone out of the dumps! Splendid advice in this verse:
"Life's not meant for folks to live
In sorrow and despair
And life's not meant for dying when you're young
Everyday's a new beginning, a brand new melody
A song to sing that never has been sung"
We should take a leaf from the wisdom of the birds and keep singing - even in the depths of winter. Sometimes that is all that will pull us through.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much Tony, for this lovely and generous Review and stars. It is always a gift and delight to hear from you dear friend! your words and thoughts are indeed PRECIOUS! Blessings always, Vance
Comment from Leena
Wow that was so encouraging, so inspiring. Your poem is totally heartwarming and very well written. Not just for those who might be going through a low phase but I believe it would be equally uplifting to any reader who reads it. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Wow that was so encouraging, so inspiring. Your poem is totally heartwarming and very well written. Not just for those who might be going through a low phase but I believe it would be equally uplifting to any reader who reads it. Great job!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Wow! Leena, thanks for this really uplifting and generous review and stars! You have made my day with this great review and I really appreciate it. Please stay tuned...always glad to hear from you! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You are welcome and the pleasure is all mine :) Have a great day!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely poem/song lyric, my friend. Very upbeat abd inspirational. It gas much of the same message as the poem I just posted. Great minds think alike~Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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This is a lovely poem/song lyric, my friend. Very upbeat abd inspirational. It gas much of the same message as the poem I just posted. Great minds think alike~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
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Thank you Debbie, for this lovely review and stars. It is a pleasure to meet you and I hope to see you again soon. I shall come visit your works as well. Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Rubylou
Oh my, I love this poem.it really has a pick-me-up quality through your words.
I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Very picturesque; a cloud pillow, soothing wind, and flowers from tears. Just beautiful .
Rubylou
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Oh my, I love this poem.it really has a pick-me-up quality through your words.
I especially enjoyed the last stanza. Very picturesque; a cloud pillow, soothing wind, and flowers from tears. Just beautiful .
Rubylou
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much Rubylou, for this great review and stars! I'm so glad to know you enjoyed it and please know, you made my day! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
