From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "What 's grayness really mean"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Sally Law
I give you an excellent review for content and heart! Vance, thank you for sharing such wisdom and depth with all of us here at FanStory! My only critique is don't forget to have someone check for capitalization and punctuation for you. Add some paragraphs to break up your text. It makes it easier to read. I know you have been undergoing some medical testing and I have been praying for you. I hope you are doing better! I trust this fan mail reaches you and conveys my gratitude and thanks with get well wishes and prayers!
Sally
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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I give you an excellent review for content and heart! Vance, thank you for sharing such wisdom and depth with all of us here at FanStory! My only critique is don't forget to have someone check for capitalization and punctuation for you. Add some paragraphs to break up your text. It makes it easier to read. I know you have been undergoing some medical testing and I have been praying for you. I hope you are doing better! I trust this fan mail reaches you and conveys my gratitude and thanks with get well wishes and prayers!
Sally
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much Sally, for your very kind and thoughtful review and stars! you are so very precious and always caring in your very lovely messages. Bless you always! Vance
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Tihank you Vance !
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Out of the greyness comes hope and and your struggle just now is a tribute to your strength and tenacity to win through with your faith Vance, I wish you well, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Out of the greyness comes hope and and your struggle just now is a tribute to your strength and tenacity to win through with your faith Vance, I wish you well, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks do much Dearest Dolly! Your encouragement and compassion is priceless rare, and beloved! Vance
Comment from Ricky1024
"Separation of the concepts of necessary beliefs from art to religions...
"From Mariage to the Carirage...
"From all fundementals that make each individual unique...
"Are being effected today by...
'The Seven Laws of Judification.'
{My beliefs}
...
"From a lack of Monopolization Laws to Tele-communication...
"From Addictions to the Tobacco Industry...
"From Banking to the Oil Industry...
"To Religion's fading Light...
These factors based on my laws and ...
"The Seven Deadly Sins" are eradicating society as we know it.
"Rape and murder are up in most major cities.
Pornography is ever growing right into our children's video
games...
"Is this...
"Satan's Grim Game?'
...
"I like your thoughts here..
"Collective and effective...
Ricky1024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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"Separation of the concepts of necessary beliefs from art to religions...
"From Mariage to the Carirage...
"From all fundementals that make each individual unique...
"Are being effected today by...
'The Seven Laws of Judification.'
{My beliefs}
...
"From a lack of Monopolization Laws to Tele-communication...
"From Addictions to the Tobacco Industry...
"From Banking to the Oil Industry...
"To Religion's fading Light...
These factors based on my laws and ...
"The Seven Deadly Sins" are eradicating society as we know it.
"Rape and murder are up in most major cities.
Pornography is ever growing right into our children's video
games...
"Is this...
"Satan's Grim Game?'
...
"I like your thoughts here..
"Collective and effective...
Ricky1024
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much Ricky for you very "broad-minded" reply on my pinball poem! I appreciate your very rich and unique perspectives and thank you for the very creative and interesting review and stars! Stay tuned! Vance
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Those days long past....
Ricky..
Comment from JDRBAR
When writing a book of any type, the author must take into consideration the audience he is hoping to reach. To me, this piece is one I would have to struggle to fully comprehend its message. I think you should label this writing so only those readers with PhDs would review it.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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When writing a book of any type, the author must take into consideration the audience he is hoping to reach. To me, this piece is one I would have to struggle to fully comprehend its message. I think you should label this writing so only those readers with PhDs would review it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thanks JDRBAR, much appreciated. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Vance; thank you so much for sharing this insightful piece about 'grayness.' I think we all experience our own shades of gray in many areas. Your definition made me reflect on those things, and reminds me to explore exactly what they mean.
~patty~
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Hi Vance; thank you so much for sharing this insightful piece about 'grayness.' I think we all experience our own shades of gray in many areas. Your definition made me reflect on those things, and reminds me to explore exactly what they mean.
~patty~
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you patty, for this great review and stars! I thought I had replied already but two thanks are still better anyway. Blessings always! Vance
Comment from F. Wehr3
I thought your article was very good, and I enjoyed hearing your thoughts. I made some notes as I was reading. Please consider the following.
First, let's talk about your title, "What's grayness really mean" I paused on this. Grayness, what it means. or What does grayness mean?--Just a suggestion.
As a general thought, I wanted to see paragraphs and have you flesh out your thoughts a little more.
The fundamental mechanisims of human creativity are engineered into each new human within their DNA (author's belief) and as such we are separated by other forms of life as being sentient or consciously aware of whatever we may consider "reality". --Spelling mechanisms. I don't think you need to say author's belief, but you do need a comma after DNA. This denotes you have two complete sentences on either side of your conjunction and. Also, recommend a comma after such.
Poetry is a profoundly powerful gynmasium of the mind that demands courageous exploration in to "gray" areas of perception, of "gray" areas of all forms of the arcane sciences and religions, and human species itself.--Spelling gymnasium. I loved your alliteration in the line, you really are poet, aren't you? In the last part of the sentence, I would suggest taking out an 'and and replacing it with a comma. Comma after sciences, delete and.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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I thought your article was very good, and I enjoyed hearing your thoughts. I made some notes as I was reading. Please consider the following.
First, let's talk about your title, "What's grayness really mean" I paused on this. Grayness, what it means. or What does grayness mean?--Just a suggestion.
As a general thought, I wanted to see paragraphs and have you flesh out your thoughts a little more.
The fundamental mechanisims of human creativity are engineered into each new human within their DNA (author's belief) and as such we are separated by other forms of life as being sentient or consciously aware of whatever we may consider "reality". --Spelling mechanisms. I don't think you need to say author's belief, but you do need a comma after DNA. This denotes you have two complete sentences on either side of your conjunction and. Also, recommend a comma after such.
Poetry is a profoundly powerful gynmasium of the mind that demands courageous exploration in to "gray" areas of perception, of "gray" areas of all forms of the arcane sciences and religions, and human species itself.--Spelling gymnasium. I loved your alliteration in the line, you really are poet, aren't you? In the last part of the sentence, I would suggest taking out an 'and and replacing it with a comma. Comma after sciences, delete and.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you sincerely Russell, for this very thoughtful and helpful review. It is much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter in your book from out of the grayness. It is an interesting concept of our thoughts that come from the grayness of our brain. Where we can either fall into darkness or find the light.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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A very well-written chapter in your book from out of the grayness. It is an interesting concept of our thoughts that come from the grayness of our brain. Where we can either fall into darkness or find the light.
Typo:
mass that houses the (the) vehicles of (one the can be deleted)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you Sandra, for this lovely review and generous stars. I really appreciate it and hope you will stay with me as I roll out this first book! Blessings always! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Treischel
I am in total agreement with your concept of creation and think the expression of grayness, as you expressed here, is profound. Your conceptualization and presentation of it is beautifully defined. I applaud the effort and the sentiment.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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I am in total agreement with your concept of creation and think the expression of grayness, as you expressed here, is profound. Your conceptualization and presentation of it is beautifully defined. I applaud the effort and the sentiment.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017
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Thanks so much dear friend for your very kind and uplifting review. Your words are a true gift as your works themselves always are as well. Blessings always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from doggymad
This prologue has given me much to think about. If we would just stop and consider that like plants, we too have to lean towards the light in order to be the best we can.
I will be following with interest
love and hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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This prologue has given me much to think about. If we would just stop and consider that like plants, we too have to lean towards the light in order to be the best we can.
I will be following with interest
love and hugs
Freda
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Bless you dear one...I'm delighted to know you will be connected and I promise to do my best to bring light to the darkness! Blessings and love! Vance..PS; GIVE THE PUPS A HUG FROM UNCLE VANCE
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The boys send you big slobbery kissed
love and light
Freda
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jUST GOTTA NAPKIN RIGHT ON TIME LOVE AND HUGS VANCE
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Good thinking, their breath isn't the best either, they had fish earlier xxxx
Comment from apky
This is a very thought-provoking piece of writing, Vance.
We got that sentience and perception ability from our Creator whom, we learn, created us in his own image. The picture you have above speaks for His Greatness, because however much we were created in His image, we cannot come up with anything to equal his Creation.
The more we should be in awe of Nature and preserve what the Creator gave us as a precious gift.
Thanks for a wonderful thoughts.
Apky
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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This is a very thought-provoking piece of writing, Vance.
We got that sentience and perception ability from our Creator whom, we learn, created us in his own image. The picture you have above speaks for His Greatness, because however much we were created in His image, we cannot come up with anything to equal his Creation.
The more we should be in awe of Nature and preserve what the Creator gave us as a precious gift.
Thanks for a wonderful thoughts.
Apky
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much apky, for your lovely and generous review. It is greatly appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
