Minnesota Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Frustration at Itaska"Poems About and Around Minnesota
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Comment from l.raven
OMG, This sounds so wonderful.It is so hrd to find beautiful places anymore. They are all being destoryed. I love the picture. And the calm feeling you get from this story. very well written
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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OMG, This sounds so wonderful.It is so hrd to find beautiful places anymore. They are all being destoryed. I love the picture. And the calm feeling you get from this story. very well written
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thank you l.raven. You made my day.
Comment from Gungalo
It's a great story to tell but it is not a sonnet. A sonnet would have 10 syllables to a line and be iambic. Like I said if it were labeled as free style it would be perfect.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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It's a great story to tell but it is not a sonnet. A sonnet would have 10 syllables to a line and be iambic. Like I said if it were labeled as free style it would be perfect.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Ok, thanks for the review. Where I messed up, I went 10 words to a line, not 10 syllables. this is my first effort, so I appreciate the input, having never done a sonnet before.
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Ah, if you are ever in doubt over a style and what it should be like, you can check in Poetry Dances under the Home button. Writing in iambic pentameter is not quite as easy. LOL.
Comment from mizzkris20
Your poem is filled with Impatience and the frustration of having to wait. I love the picture, as it goes well with the poem. Your choice of words flows well. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Your poem is filled with Impatience and the frustration of having to wait. I love the picture, as it goes well with the poem. Your choice of words flows well. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks for the review
Comment from ronnie k
Thank you, i am quite sure this is as real as the many holiday joints I a so reluctantly remember. You open up a story book in this limited space called poetry, great job. So little holds so much.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you, i am quite sure this is as real as the many holiday joints I a so reluctantly remember. You open up a story book in this limited space called poetry, great job. So little holds so much.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you for that nice review.
Comment from Georgia333
Impatience comes out of the poem, and the frustration of having to wait. Great picture. The poem is filled with regard for the landscape and the inner need to go faster. Well done thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Impatience comes out of the poem, and the frustration of having to wait. Great picture. The poem is filled with regard for the landscape and the inner need to go faster. Well done thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you Georgia. You brighten a cloudy day.
