History and Myth
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Across the Great Prairie"Poems that tell stories of long ago
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Comment from simonbagh
That what is taken place in this world by those people that are always in quest of something that they think they have lost or they are deprived of,
Simon
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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That what is taken place in this world by those people that are always in quest of something that they think they have lost or they are deprived of,
Simon
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the trek made by many pioneers and the fears they faced, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the trek made by many pioneers and the fears they faced, i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the review and the good wishes too.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Wonderful work done on inspiration of the past long gone pioneers of the time. I love the run of telling a story in this form. Good flow with good rhyming sheme.
ola thomas
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Wonderful work done on inspiration of the past long gone pioneers of the time. I love the run of telling a story in this form. Good flow with good rhyming sheme.
ola thomas
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanks Ola. It's nice to be recognized
Comment from ameen786
Hello Treishcel and welcome to the site; my friend, you penned a wonderful ditty capturing the essence of the good old western classics; the verse has excellent rhyme and rhythm as well as superb alliteration; thanks for the delightful read and good luck!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Hello Treishcel and welcome to the site; my friend, you penned a wonderful ditty capturing the essence of the good old western classics; the verse has excellent rhyme and rhythm as well as superb alliteration; thanks for the delightful read and good luck!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for the review and the warm welcome.
Comment from l.raven
OMG, This is just wonderful I can see why that would inspire you. Your poem is well written and has a good smooth read to it. And I loveeee the picture.
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OMG, This is just wonderful I can see why that would inspire you. Your poem is well written and has a good smooth read to it. And I loveeee the picture.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Ah Raven, you make my heart soar.
Comment from GWHARGIS
The westward movement was truly a unique part of history. Your poem captured some of that feeling. I enjoyed the poem very much. The flow and rhyming was great. Nice job.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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The westward movement was truly a unique part of history. Your poem captured some of that feeling. I enjoyed the poem very much. The flow and rhyming was great. Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you for yor review of this small window in time.
Comment from EMB
This was a really good poem that takes readers back to the era of pioneers moving west, looking for a better life. From preachers to outlaws really gives a great picture of who all felt the grass was greener in that direction. Your imagery was terrific, and I loved the rhyming narrative.
Excellent work.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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This was a really good poem that takes readers back to the era of pioneers moving west, looking for a better life. From preachers to outlaws really gives a great picture of who all felt the grass was greener in that direction. Your imagery was terrific, and I loved the rhyming narrative.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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I really appreciate your comments Edward. Thanks
Comment from Cindy Warren
I can only imagine what they must have felt. I would have been scared to death. Nice use of rhyming couplets. It works well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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I can only imagine what they must have felt. I would have been scared to death. Nice use of rhyming couplets. It works well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you Cindy.And for your good wishes.
