The Best Of You
This is how to live a happy life4 total reviews
Comment from Sally Carter
A neat little poem, Enoch,which contains a very true message.
"Be the best of you" is an excellent phrase - simple but original. If we all achieved the best of what we could possibly be, how much richer life would become.
My only small suggestion would be to change the colour of the words or the background, since the pink on pale grey is rather hard to read.
Best wishes to you.
Sally
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
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A neat little poem, Enoch,which contains a very true message.
"Be the best of you" is an excellent phrase - simple but original. If we all achieved the best of what we could possibly be, how much richer life would become.
My only small suggestion would be to change the colour of the words or the background, since the pink on pale grey is rather hard to read.
Best wishes to you.
Sally
Comment Written 09-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2012
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I highly appreciate your kind thoughts and comment. Thanks so much for your suggestion.
Comment from adewpearl
Enoch, your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration in be the best
and the insightful advice you offer :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Enoch, your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
I like the alliteration in be the best
and the insightful advice you offer :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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I'm honored by your kind comment, hope to be a great poet like you very soon. Thanks
Comment from Gooloom
You have certainly inspired me. "be the best of you" is very well written in the 5 7 5 genre. You make it sound so easy when to make sense in 3 short lines is very very difficult. You have a rare gift and i can see you making a name for your self in your chosen field. As youwill always try to better yourself till you reach the best. gooloom
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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You have certainly inspired me. "be the best of you" is very well written in the 5 7 5 genre. You make it sound so easy when to make sense in 3 short lines is very very difficult. You have a rare gift and i can see you making a name for your self in your chosen field. As youwill always try to better yourself till you reach the best. gooloom
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Hello Gooloom, I highly appreciate your comment. I'm new on this site and this is my first poem on the site.. Thanks
Comment from angela59
i loved the simple way in which so few words said so much , and the fact that you did not use a picture as this made me read the actual words, and intentional or not, it added to the uniqueness of the poem, to me, as it was not trying to be anything else but itself. angela59
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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i loved the simple way in which so few words said so much , and the fact that you did not use a picture as this made me read the actual words, and intentional or not, it added to the uniqueness of the poem, to me, as it was not trying to be anything else but itself. angela59
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Hello Angela, thank you for your beautiful comment. Just this comment inspires me to write more. I'm new on this site and this is my first poem on the site. Hope you are a poet too. I would be glad to be your friend so we can share a lot more to improve our writings. Thanks
