Lost Identity
A 5/7/5 poem16 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form, Kamran
I like the alliteration in what/without
and in recognition/respect
and you convey a most meaningful message
Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form, Kamran
I like the alliteration in what/without
and in recognition/respect
and you convey a most meaningful message
Brooke
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Brooke my friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful, encouraging review, thank you very much.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Wise words you've constructed in your 5/7/5 .It could even be a proverb one day! One of my pet subjects is self-respect along with self-discipline... seems to be what our young people lack in many instances. Giddy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Wise words you've constructed in your 5/7/5 .It could even be a proverb one day! One of my pet subjects is self-respect along with self-discipline... seems to be what our young people lack in many instances. Giddy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Hello Giddy, my friend, I am honored and humbled by your visit and I thank you for your time and the wonderful, insightful review, please take care.
Comment from Spitfire
Powerful concepts: recognition and self-respect. If you have to gain one quality to lose another, than you are being false to yourself. Grest use of alliteration in this small poetic form.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Powerful concepts: recognition and self-respect. If you have to gain one quality to lose another, than you are being false to yourself. Grest use of alliteration in this small poetic form.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Shari my friend, glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Dave Russell
Very wise words my friend...a six star effort in my book. That is not an easy feat when writing the shorties. This shows much depth, and cause for thought. Very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Very wise words my friend...a six star effort in my book. That is not an easy feat when writing the shorties. This shows much depth, and cause for thought. Very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
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Hello again my friend, I thank you for your time and the kind, graceful review, God bless.
Comment from Titanx9
One definitely cannot bestow recognition upon someone with any sense of integrity if there is not respect for that individual. Great insight into this one. I enjoyed this one!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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One definitely cannot bestow recognition upon someone with any sense of integrity if there is not respect for that individual. Great insight into this one. I enjoyed this one!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Dossie my friend, I appreciate the time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Ameen, I was thinking that the photo is of a palm tree after a bad storm. It lost all identity and self respect without it's fronds. Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Aloha Ameen, I was thinking that the photo is of a palm tree after a bad storm. It lost all identity and self respect without it's fronds. Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Hello Ginger, my friend, always a joy to have you visit, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Earl of Oxford
This is extremely clever and profound, Kamran.
Indeed, too many will do anything to get noticed or for acclaim, neglecting their values or morals (if they had any in the first place) in the process.
Very powerful comment in word economy.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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This is extremely clever and profound, Kamran.
Indeed, too many will do anything to get noticed or for acclaim, neglecting their values or morals (if they had any in the first place) in the process.
Very powerful comment in word economy.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Ray my friend, I am honored and humbled by your visit, I thank you for your time and the encouraging review, please take care.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kamran, this is a small poem with a big meaning. You can't have much respect for yourself lf your not really that person. Very well said. well done!! Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Hi Kamran, this is a small poem with a big meaning. You can't have much respect for yourself lf your not really that person. Very well said. well done!! Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Linda my friend, I am pleased by your visit and thank you very much for the wonderful review, have a great week.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ameen, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about keeping our integrity makes us who we are. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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this is very well written, ameen, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about keeping our integrity makes us who we are. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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My friend, I appreciate your time and the insightful review, thank you very much, God bless you.
Comment from Gungalo
A wonderful write Ameen in which self respect is given its due. One cannot possibly have any recognition worth its while if one has no self respect. Bravo.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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A wonderful write Ameen in which self respect is given its due. One cannot possibly have any recognition worth its while if one has no self respect. Bravo.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Gunga my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review, please take care.
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Smiles Ameen.
