All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Soul's Voice"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Glasstruth
You make sleeping seem like a gigantic adventure. The only problem is when you wake it's all forgotten. Love these lines:
"let your essence
slip
through
the window
to infinite midnight blue
our soul-stars streaking
to the dark side of the moon
and beyond the edgeless universe
to end of time itself" Very creative. Sorry, all my sixes are gone. Superb! Les
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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You make sleeping seem like a gigantic adventure. The only problem is when you wake it's all forgotten. Love these lines:
"let your essence
slip
through
the window
to infinite midnight blue
our soul-stars streaking
to the dark side of the moon
and beyond the edgeless universe
to end of time itself" Very creative. Sorry, all my sixes are gone. Superb! Les
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thank you so much Les - love it that you enjoy my stuff! these are my favorite lines too.
Comment from Manrai Chore
A rip -dip narration of something divine wondering.The theme is instited upon very hardly.The colour violet is good to suit the divinity.-Manrai Chore
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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A rip -dip narration of something divine wondering.The theme is instited upon very hardly.The colour violet is good to suit the divinity.-Manrai Chore
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thx somuch Manrai!
Comment from c_lucas
Children under the age of five are tuned into the metaphysical world, but are led astray by well meaning adults who wants them to out grow their world of imagination.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Children under the age of five are tuned into the metaphysical world, but are led astray by well meaning adults who wants them to out grow their world of imagination.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thx Charlie!
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you're welcome.
Comment from misscookie
I love your poem very much
It left me with a smile on my face.
Those were days of love and peace, not a worry in the world.
I can relate with your son.I to saw God in my youth.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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I love your poem very much
It left me with a smile on my face.
Those were days of love and peace, not a worry in the world.
I can relate with your son.I to saw God in my youth.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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thx misscookie!! :)
Comment from Angels27
A very descriptive emotive writeup. The picture is perfect and the lines flow unhindered. The readers get a glimpse of a different world. Very different article.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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A very descriptive emotive writeup. The picture is perfect and the lines flow unhindered. The readers get a glimpse of a different world. Very different article.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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glad you enjoyed it Angels!
Comment from Titanx9
I always think of babies as having some sense of God and you just validated that. When they sleep and have that look of peace and contentment, you know they have a type of peace that's other worldly. Great job with this lyrical piece. Absolutely beautiful!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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I always think of babies as having some sense of God and you just validated that. When they sleep and have that look of peace and contentment, you know they have a type of peace that's other worldly. Great job with this lyrical piece. Absolutely beautiful!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Titan - there's so much we don't know, isn't there?
Comment from Celestina Waters
Oh Blessed Be, this poem spoke right to me. I would "body jump" as often as possible when I was a wee gal. I felt I was swimming, pushing higher and higher to the surface. I was weightless and strong. I have never forgotten my journeys abroad.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem and the note.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Oh Blessed Be, this poem spoke right to me. I would "body jump" as often as possible when I was a wee gal. I felt I was swimming, pushing higher and higher to the surface. I was weightless and strong. I have never forgotten my journeys abroad.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem and the note.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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I'm so delighted that my piece resonated with you and your childhood Celestina - and a special "thank you" for that lovely six!
Comment from honeytree
Apparently we can have an "out of body experience."
Human beings can be different.
We have our own personality
We love to be love and can bring
Joy to others who feel sad.
Everyone of us have our own
Personality and learning skills.
We are born to grow
To learn so much growing up.
We will go to heaven one day
To be with God family and friends.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Apparently we can have an "out of body experience."
Human beings can be different.
We have our own personality
We love to be love and can bring
Joy to others who feel sad.
Everyone of us have our own
Personality and learning skills.
We are born to grow
To learn so much growing up.
We will go to heaven one day
To be with God family and friends.
Honey tree
Comment Written 02-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you honeytree - I'm with you!
Comment from Cornelius2000
I found this very touching. Those of us who have had children might remember looking down at them at night, and wondering what's going through their minds. If we had just had your poem available to us we'd have known. It's beautifully written.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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I found this very touching. Those of us who have had children might remember looking down at them at night, and wondering what's going through their minds. If we had just had your poem available to us we'd have known. It's beautifully written.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Dave ... so much we don't know, hmm? that's the mystery.
Comment from J. D. Means
What an incredible poem! I have not seen it put so plainly, the reality of what is true reality. All religions say that our soul is immortal and that we go someplace when our body dies. In that, I surmise that we must have come from that someplace to begin with. So we are just here for a little while, till, finally we go back home.
You have woven the reality of the universe into one little poem. We do remember, so a little while, till we have to fall into the trappings of this fiction, to be considered 'normal'
It is great to remember home. But it is also wonderful to know that we came here to learn more about the true power, "The Power of Love."
Awesome!
Joe
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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What an incredible poem! I have not seen it put so plainly, the reality of what is true reality. All religions say that our soul is immortal and that we go someplace when our body dies. In that, I surmise that we must have come from that someplace to begin with. So we are just here for a little while, till, finally we go back home.
You have woven the reality of the universe into one little poem. We do remember, so a little while, till we have to fall into the trappings of this fiction, to be considered 'normal'
It is great to remember home. But it is also wonderful to know that we came here to learn more about the true power, "The Power of Love."
Awesome!
Joe
Comment Written 02-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Joe thank you SO much for understanding and resonating with this piece, which was a special write for me. Blessings, and double blessings, too, for that big six! :)
