Oceania
a nonet27 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
This nonet is timely for the holiday season and would have made a good entry for the current contest. I enjoyed your description and use of alliteration. Thanks for adding the photo as well--I'm sure your husband is pleased with the result. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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This nonet is timely for the holiday season and would have made a good entry for the current contest. I enjoyed your description and use of alliteration. Thanks for adding the photo as well--I'm sure your husband is pleased with the result. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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This was a fun project and thanks for your positive comments. My husband is very pleased. He is into electronics, so I amazed he was interested in this mermaid. Elaine
Comment from lakeport
Oceania indeed, beautiful nature. that's a beautiful expressed poem, nice in nonet form,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Oceania indeed, beautiful nature. that's a beautiful expressed poem, nice in nonet form,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thanks for taking time to read and review. I am happy you enjoyed this unique project. Elaine
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from ajdevore
Wonderful. I can see that a nonet is a challenge. Twice I had to recount! What a charming and whimsical mind you have. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Wonderful. I can see that a nonet is a challenge. Twice I had to recount! What a charming and whimsical mind you have. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from doris1022
cutely written today but I see you have written in fine form and grammar. keep the pen aimed at genius and creativity.
the story grabbed me and kept me in there!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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cutely written today but I see you have written in fine form and grammar. keep the pen aimed at genius and creativity.
the story grabbed me and kept me in there!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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I am honored by your review. Thank you. Elaine
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
This was really different and a great nonet, to boot. Nice imagery, that is unique, with the pumpkin and the mermaid. Loved those first four lines. Holly
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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This was really different and a great nonet, to boot. Nice imagery, that is unique, with the pumpkin and the mermaid. Loved those first four lines. Holly
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thanks for taking time to read and enjoy. Elaine
Comment from Angels27
Oceania is a very sweet imaginative poem. Mermaids....hmmmm...I guess it is a topic close to your heart as your pen name also reflects that. Lovely descriptive verse.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Oceania is a very sweet imaginative poem. Mermaids....hmmmm...I guess it is a topic close to your heart as your pen name also reflects that. Lovely descriptive verse.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thanks for a great review and taking time to read. Elaine
Comment from Cleo Belle
A lovely poem with a simple topic that you have crafted very well so that we get fine imagery and a lot of daftness, all bound up within a few short lines. Well done, and thanks. Cleo Belle
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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A lovely poem with a simple topic that you have crafted very well so that we get fine imagery and a lot of daftness, all bound up within a few short lines. Well done, and thanks. Cleo Belle
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a great review. Elaine
Comment from JennLikestoWrite
I like how you wrote this short poem. I think having someone watch over is important. I like mermaids and for you to use it as a protector for the fisherman was a great choice.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I like how you wrote this short poem. I think having someone watch over is important. I like mermaids and for you to use it as a protector for the fisherman was a great choice.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from Norbanus
A delightful and difficult assignment. But you got the job done. Although it takes lot of imagination to dream up something as unlikely as a Sea Pumpkin.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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A delightful and difficult assignment. But you got the job done. Although it takes lot of imagination to dream up something as unlikely as a Sea Pumpkin.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Otto Loewi
Half-mermaid, half pumpkin--how could one go wrong. This was a good nonet, being enjoyable to the reader while adhering to the rules of the form. I liked the picture you painted of the different things the mermaid sees while in the water.
Superb.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Half-mermaid, half pumpkin--how could one go wrong. This was a good nonet, being enjoyable to the reader while adhering to the rules of the form. I liked the picture you painted of the different things the mermaid sees while in the water.
Superb.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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I am honored by your review. Elaine
