Comment from Angels27

Excellent

Oh..!! What a sad last line....so used to Goldilocks and the little bear being friends forever...:)) a very unique concept for an Acrostic poem. Very innovative. All the best :)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

Ah, no, couldn't let her get away with all that breaking and entering and breaking....
Thanks for stopping by.

Steve

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Godilock in a more realistic story. This is very well written acrostic with a humorous overtone. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

Thank you, Charlie - glad you enjoyed.

Steve

reply by c_lucas on 29-Oct-2012

You're welcome, Steve. Charlie

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

And a fine, truncated retelling it is. The bruin/ruin and polished/demolished rhyme are very funny.
I suspect I know who you are, author, but the fact that are no funny spellings is giving me paws.

Best of luck with the voters.

Peace, Lee

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012

wot, yu fink aye dunno how to spel propper!?

Thanks, Lee.

Steve

reply by humpwhistle on 29-Oct-2012

I couldn't have said it better myself. L