Psalms for the Journey
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Psalm of Reclamation"Talking to God over life's journey
22 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
strong aaabb rhyming
I very much like the two line refrain
and the alliteration in Lord/loving
Strong expression of soulful emotion with a powerful message of faith :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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strong aaabb rhyming
I very much like the two line refrain
and the alliteration in Lord/loving
Strong expression of soulful emotion with a powerful message of faith :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
Comment from Gideon Roth
Wow, what a great poem. I totally related to this poem and the important truth it holds. I recently gave one of my bibles to a former colleague and sure wish I could have included this poem as he considers God's word concerning salvation. The message in this poem, coupled with the fact that is was flawlessly written, compelled me to give it a six star rating...Gideon
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Wow, what a great poem. I totally related to this poem and the important truth it holds. I recently gave one of my bibles to a former colleague and sure wish I could have included this poem as he considers God's word concerning salvation. The message in this poem, coupled with the fact that is was flawlessly written, compelled me to give it a six star rating...Gideon
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- feel free to send him a copy, Gideon - my appreciation again for the sixer -- love, jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
i can feel the release from the pressure that has been building up inside you. made me smile. the picture is awesome. hope you are having a great day.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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jan,
i can feel the release from the pressure that has been building up inside you. made me smile. the picture is awesome. hope you are having a great day.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- again, really appreciate the sixer -- love, jan
Comment from amarherig14
Such an inspirational poem .It is a praise to God for assuring,loving , holding helping, redeeming and saving you. Loved the repeating stanzas, wording imagery , flow of lines and the art used. Let's praise God from whom all blessings flow!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Such an inspirational poem .It is a praise to God for assuring,loving , holding helping, redeeming and saving you. Loved the repeating stanzas, wording imagery , flow of lines and the art used. Let's praise God from whom all blessings flow!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
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Jan,dn't worry about it. Blessings,Margie
Comment from artemis53
Excellent piece of gratitude and the renewal of Faith. It is a very personal prayer between yourself and Your God. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Excellent piece of gratitude and the renewal of Faith. It is a very personal prayer between yourself and Your God. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a wonderful poem/prayer. I know I could pray this often. I tend to give God my problems, then I end up taking them back instead of letting Him handle them.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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This is a wonderful poem/prayer. I know I could pray this often. I tend to give God my problems, then I end up taking them back instead of letting Him handle them.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- yes, I tend to do the same thing -- love, jan
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very good prayer I like the thank you lord at the end of each verse very well planned out and I like the picture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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This is a very good prayer I like the thank you lord at the end of each verse very well planned out and I like the picture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
Comment from Curly Girly
Beautiful words! This is a lovely series of verses which are comforting and true. They describe a personal relationship with the Lord and personal struggles, coupled with growth.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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Beautiful words! This is a lovely series of verses which are comforting and true. They describe a personal relationship with the Lord and personal struggles, coupled with growth.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2012
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sorry for the late reply -- thank you for reading -- love, jan
Comment from yonashalom
My my, don't you love those moments? where a little message of inspiration and assurance of His presence and control over all things just washes away any doubt or fears. I like the repeating lines. It makes it like a Psalm and reminds us with each thought to take it captive and make it a praise. Nice job. I enjoyed this piece of inspiration. :) Thanks. ~Yona
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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My my, don't you love those moments? where a little message of inspiration and assurance of His presence and control over all things just washes away any doubt or fears. I like the repeating lines. It makes it like a Psalm and reminds us with each thought to take it captive and make it a praise. Nice job. I enjoyed this piece of inspiration. :) Thanks. ~Yona
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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thanks for reading - sorry this is so late - love, jan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A very strong spiritual poem dear Jan. Felt more like a thanking and prayer like work. Beautifully filled with all one is reminded of in life and in our spirituality.
Thanks for sharing. You should have entered this in the faith contest.:)
Maureen
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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A very strong spiritual poem dear Jan. Felt more like a thanking and prayer like work. Beautifully filled with all one is reminded of in life and in our spirituality.
Thanks for sharing. You should have entered this in the faith contest.:)
Maureen
Comment Written 15-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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thanks for reading - sorry this is so late - love, jan
