Comment from cherylmelwoods

Excellent

I think you did a fine job " mixing it up" with innuendoes ! Certainly one heck of an interesting cocktail.

Everything about this poem is worthy!!

Cheryl

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

As time rolls in along "The Eastern SeaBoard, the Fog, remarkably, disipates...
Even mt Grammar seems to have improved..
LOL!!!

reply by cherylmelwoods on 14-Oct-2012

Yes your grammar is on the 'up and up!'
Well done. C

Comment from doris1022

Good

Did you mean to say wintern? And in the last stanza I think you meant to say whether(spell) but just suggestions...like The work overall. Nice work well written....I Would recommend it to others. Flows like water dripping off an apple bobbers head. Keep the writers juice flowing in your brain

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012

Yew! Ya Caught me...
Wintern is not a word, just me being fancy, shamancy!
yes, weather was a typo.
thanks,
Richard.

Comment from bkbehera

Excellent

"A little bit of nuts
goes a long, long, way,
for the acorn does not
fall very far from that
old, oak, tree in the
Wintern Night. "
This is the reality of life in its true sence.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012

well, I guess kudos for me?
Thasnksm,
Ricky1024
"The Ricketier"