A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Can of Worms!"Metre ... Freeverse
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Comment from Gungalo
Seriously Bic, I was wondering where you were. ow I serously wonder where you were. What is this write? It's about worms that YOU take to dinner at 5? This is worthy:
Desperately unfaithful
disparaging thought,
twisted offence, writhing
worms of canned intent;
moments of displeasure,
swathing, squirming mass.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Seriously Bic, I was wondering where you were. ow I serously wonder where you were. What is this write? It's about worms that YOU take to dinner at 5? This is worthy:
Desperately unfaithful
disparaging thought,
twisted offence, writhing
worms of canned intent;
moments of displeasure,
swathing, squirming mass.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Well, ...G the worms are the contorted fractured minds that deliver people into conversation about all sorts of things... these minds are connected to bodies that have real flesh and blood whereby they walk and respond, it's amazing...
...sometimes better not to go there... LOL.
...just popping in and out will be back at some stage but having a little break for my own peace of mind...LOL.
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I see Bic. LOL. Well I sure do miss ya around here guy. Take care of yourself and don't do anything I wouldn't do. LOL
