Cure for Depression
The cure for depression can be found if you grasp it. My ART46 total reviews
Comment from Dudemanguy
Wow! a coinsidence this being the 1st I run across, awesome poem & great use of ure picture by the way. It's hard, depression can hold you back if u let it.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Wow! a coinsidence this being the 1st I run across, awesome poem & great use of ure picture by the way. It's hard, depression can hold you back if u let it.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your lovely review about this piece which I posted last year. CG
Comment from Deorre Leonard
Life!!! Cure for depression... This is a creative and unique piece it has a really good flow the picture adds to the creative piece. You did a really good job with this. Deorre
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Life!!! Cure for depression... This is a creative and unique piece it has a really good flow the picture adds to the creative piece. You did a really good job with this. Deorre
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you,Deorre, I am glad you enjoyed it. CG
Comment from Katherine2
I choose life! I really liked how your poem just kept pushing goodness from out of the dark. Bringing the reader into the light really made this poem excellent. ~Katherine
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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I choose life! I really liked how your poem just kept pushing goodness from out of the dark. Bringing the reader into the light really made this poem excellent. ~Katherine
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review Katherine. CG
Comment from McMurry903
I really love your poem and your original art work! This is such a wonderful and important message as depression is a major issue that gets little attention. Thank you for sharing this very well written piece! Brian :)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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I really love your poem and your original art work! This is such a wonderful and important message as depression is a major issue that gets little attention. Thank you for sharing this very well written piece! Brian :)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you Brian for your good review. CG
Comment from Chris Tee
The artwork is awesome and you are really talented. The poem has a darkish connotation to it in the beginning then it accelerates into hope.
Well done indeed with this excellent work.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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The artwork is awesome and you are really talented. The poem has a darkish connotation to it in the beginning then it accelerates into hope.
Well done indeed with this excellent work.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you Chris for your good review. CG
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your thought-provoking poem is exuberant and strong in its efforts to rally those who are down and hopeless. Yes, they need hope.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Your thought-provoking poem is exuberant and strong in its efforts to rally those who are down and hopeless. Yes, they need hope.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. CG
Comment from adewpearl
good proximate rhyme in drain/shame/pain
good alliteration in depression the drain
I like the rhyming progressions with the shorter bridge lines
Believe/achieve - you offer a strong, inspirational message in good poetic form :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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good proximate rhyme in drain/shame/pain
good alliteration in depression the drain
I like the rhyming progressions with the shorter bridge lines
Believe/achieve - you offer a strong, inspirational message in good poetic form :-) Brooke
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. CG
Comment from Cornelius2000
Somehow this poem strikes me as a poetic version of Dr. Wayne Dyer's approach to taking charge of your own life, as expressed in his book, "Your Erroneous Zones," and many others. It's well put, laying out the symptoms of depression first, and then suggesting remedies. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Somehow this poem strikes me as a poetic version of Dr. Wayne Dyer's approach to taking charge of your own life, as expressed in his book, "Your Erroneous Zones," and many others. It's well put, laying out the symptoms of depression first, and then suggesting remedies. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. I have never read his books. I just thought about my own problems with depression and have prayerfully endeavoured to reslove them. CG
Comment from Cornetist
The visuals and poetics both depict swords...one pierces with steel, the other with words. One makes you bleed from your body, the other...from your soul. Striking words, well-written.
Cornetist
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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The visuals and poetics both depict swords...one pierces with steel, the other with words. One makes you bleed from your body, the other...from your soul. Striking words, well-written.
Cornetist
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. CG
Comment from thecoe
i liked the set up and the way you presented your words. it flowed well and delivered the intended message. i thought you did a very good job
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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i liked the set up and the way you presented your words. it flowed well and delivered the intended message. i thought you did a very good job
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. CG
