Love Songs For Every Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Electric Love"Love poems
29 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
excellent alternate-line rhyming
I'm laughing my head off at the image in the final line
Great cadence, fantastic humor - I love when passion and romance are mixed in just the right blend, and then when love is expressed with warm humor - it is so much more satisfying to me than angst-filled love poems :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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excellent alternate-line rhyming
I'm laughing my head off at the image in the final line
Great cadence, fantastic humor - I love when passion and romance are mixed in just the right blend, and then when love is expressed with warm humor - it is so much more satisfying to me than angst-filled love poems :-) Brooke
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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You know I'm always delighted if something I post makes you laugh. Thanks for reading this, and for sharing your lovely thoughts with me. I'm glad you liked my poem. Hugs, MM
Comment from robyn corum
Each couple has its own particular moments. These are fun and brought a smile. Thanks for sharing. Liked the idea of 'electricity'. Good one.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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Each couple has its own particular moments. These are fun and brought a smile. Thanks for sharing. Liked the idea of 'electricity'. Good one.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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Thank you Robyn. I loved this review and BTW, I just bought your book and am really enjoying it! I'm not surprised to find it is very well written. I like this kind of novel anyway, but you've done a great job of hooking me in from the first page. Thanks!
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Oh! You have made my day! Thanks so much. If you get a chance when you get done I'd ask you to leave a review at amazon. I need at least five to be able to access some of the features. It would be a great favor. If you don't have time don't worry about it. Thanks again. I always enjoy your poetry and light up when I see your name in my box! *smile*.
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Of course I'll be delighted to leave a review of your book. I'd actually already planned to do that anyway. I have been at a three day women's conference that just ended so I've had too little time for reading but will now be able to get back to it. I can't wait to see what is going to happen to this poor girl!
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Thanks, MissMerri. I really hate to ask, but it's begging time, I suppose. *smile* Thanks again!
Comment from missy98writer
MissMerri,
Your poem is splendidly written with vivid imagery.
The art work you used is electrifying.
In your poem you used excellent rhyme and meter.
You used great metaphors.
You used very good alliteration.
I enjoyed your lines:
I love that, no matter the weather,
we still have those crazy hot sparks.
It's clear we're connected together,
indeed, like a pair of charged quarks.
I'd recommend your delightful poem to other reviewers.
Please have a lovely day, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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MissMerri,
Your poem is splendidly written with vivid imagery.
The art work you used is electrifying.
In your poem you used excellent rhyme and meter.
You used great metaphors.
You used very good alliteration.
I enjoyed your lines:
I love that, no matter the weather,
we still have those crazy hot sparks.
It's clear we're connected together,
indeed, like a pair of charged quarks.
I'd recommend your delightful poem to other reviewers.
Please have a lovely day, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed my electric poem Melissa. I always love hearing what you think about my posts. Your words are wonderful.
Comment from juliedickson55
Ahh yes, the passion of playful love, the lightning bolts of romance in your poem, well presented with rhymes and a good rhythm.
Love the sparks and quarks rhyme!
"we still have those crazy hot sparks.
It's clear we're connected together,
indeed, like a pair of charged quarks"
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Ahh yes, the passion of playful love, the lightning bolts of romance in your poem, well presented with rhymes and a good rhythm.
Love the sparks and quarks rhyme!
"we still have those crazy hot sparks.
It's clear we're connected together,
indeed, like a pair of charged quarks"
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you for this very nice review Julie. I'm always glad to know what you like. You are good about sharing that. Thanks so much.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is so sweet and romantic! I love the rhyme and the meter is excellent as well - it is a lovely match for this poem. It seems almost musical. Very beautiful, Miss Merri!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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This is so sweet and romantic! I love the rhyme and the meter is excellent as well - it is a lovely match for this poem. It seems almost musical. Very beautiful, Miss Merri!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you Dawn, I am very grateful for your kind words. You make me glad I write. :p
Comment from robina1978
I loved the picture that complements your poem so well. Nice quatrains with rhyme and flow. It is a bit of a funny poem. Loved the last line best.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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I loved the picture that complements your poem so well. Nice quatrains with rhyme and flow. It is a bit of a funny poem. Loved the last line best.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thank you Ene... your review is so nice. I'm glad you liked this poem.
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welcome
Comment from amada
This is so sweet, for sure it made me smile. Delightful work in a very touching subject, the sweet and true love between two old folks. Great to read.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This is so sweet, for sure it made me smile. Delightful work in a very touching subject, the sweet and true love between two old folks. Great to read.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thanks for this delightful review and your kind comments. I'm glad you saw it for exactly what it is... true love between two old folks. LOL
Comment from forestport12
I recall how you often to a wonderful job taking a subject and then tying it together at the end. Interesting how you made quark feel so perfect to sum it up. Witty and smart. Stan
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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I recall how you often to a wonderful job taking a subject and then tying it together at the end. Interesting how you made quark feel so perfect to sum it up. Witty and smart. Stan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much for this favorable review. I'm glad you liked my "love poem" with sparks. ;"). Not the usual, I admit.
Comment from Meta~Mark
This was definitely an electric charged love poem and I know about static kisses, pop, great subtle metaphors throughout and made me smile after a bad bad day my friend :)!
excellent!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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This was definitely an electric charged love poem and I know about static kisses, pop, great subtle metaphors throughout and made me smile after a bad bad day my friend :)!
excellent!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012
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Ahhhhhh Mark... I'm so sorry to hear you were having a bad day. I hope things have improved by now. If you managed a smile because of this poem, then I'm very glad you stopped by. Keep smiling... And thank you so much for all the nice words. MM
Comment from artemis53
great little piece of whimcy. MissMerr. i love your listing of what makes you smile. You couldn't have summed it up better with "It's clear we're connected together, indeed, like a pair of charged quarks."
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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great little piece of whimcy. MissMerr. i love your listing of what makes you smile. You couldn't have summed it up better with "It's clear we're connected together, indeed, like a pair of charged quarks."
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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I'm glad you liked my Electric Love poem. Thanks so much for your nice words of encouragement.
