Don't Be a DisaSTAR
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Comment from writerwish
Should bring us good cheer
Will return with clout
Then first you must write
Flags or hails from fanstory
It you use these you'll get more sixes
Lines will have five without much fix in.
I'll bet you'll win cause this is so real
Hurry, before spagmaster's heads reel
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Should bring us good cheer
Will return with clout
Then first you must write
Flags or hails from fanstory
It you use these you'll get more sixes
Lines will have five without much fix in.
I'll bet you'll win cause this is so real
Hurry, before spagmaster's heads reel
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for this very special rating! But I have to tell you this...
Thank you for your good review.
Not all are as smart as you!
I've been given a four too!
By someone completely NEW!
CG
Comment from mauial
This has a lot of sarcasm I think in it and that makes it funny to me. Some of the poets need to lighten up and look at criticism as a tool to improve. Liked the piece a lot.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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This has a lot of sarcasm I think in it and that makes it funny to me. Some of the poets need to lighten up and look at criticism as a tool to improve. Liked the piece a lot.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review.
Not all are as smart as you!
I've been given a four too!
By someone completely NEW!
Comment from juliedickson55
Pretty clever with your list of how to review in FanStory.
Many lines are true, people get pretty upset if you don't give them a 5. I have given 4's and sometimes will re review if they fix certain things, and I notice that others also review that way.
I do give 6's if deserved for something great.
Nicely done, your poem.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Pretty clever with your list of how to review in FanStory.
Many lines are true, people get pretty upset if you don't give them a 5. I have given 4's and sometimes will re review if they fix certain things, and I notice that others also review that way.
I do give 6's if deserved for something great.
Nicely done, your poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review.
Not all are as smart as you!
I've been given a four too!
By someone completely NEW!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your address to FS members is very well-written and inclusive--comments on the steps to follow, advice to new members, how to "get along" on the site, etc. Very good
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Your address to FS members is very well-written and inclusive--comments on the steps to follow, advice to new members, how to "get along" on the site, etc. Very good
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you Janice for your good review. The irony of this verse is that I sent it to a 'newy' yesterday and she gave it 4 stars. Unbelieveable! So far she is the only one to have given it less than 5. And she liked it and could find no fault with it - but will not back down! LOL
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I've had the same thing happen to me--sometimes a 3 from a newcomer who hasn't even posted anything yet!
Comment from Littlegirl38732
Oh how cute. Spoken truly, too. I learned too well last night, when I read something truly awful. Unspeakable even. :( I cannot get the images out of my mind. It was about a eight year old girl being raped. It described it detail for detail. It was a fiction work, but it upset me so badly that I began to feel a hate for the writer. I said some things to him that I shouldn't have said, eventhough he was a recognized and published writer. I started to give him three stars but I went back and gave four because it was written well except for the characters stopped talking to each other towards the middle, and it was so painful to read. I went back today and read more of his work and apologized to him. :( still it was hard to read. I enjoyed this poem. Best wishes
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Oh how cute. Spoken truly, too. I learned too well last night, when I read something truly awful. Unspeakable even. :( I cannot get the images out of my mind. It was about a eight year old girl being raped. It described it detail for detail. It was a fiction work, but it upset me so badly that I began to feel a hate for the writer. I said some things to him that I shouldn't have said, eventhough he was a recognized and published writer. I started to give him three stars but I went back and gave four because it was written well except for the characters stopped talking to each other towards the middle, and it was so painful to read. I went back today and read more of his work and apologized to him. :( still it was hard to read. I enjoyed this poem. Best wishes
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. You did the right thing and you understand this poem. I had another new person read this poem - and mark it down! ?
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Thank you for your good review. You did the right thing and you understand this poem. I had another new person read this poem - and mark it down! ?
Comment from joann r romei
This is very cute and so fitting for the site, Every word written is so true, what do we want from fanstory? beats me, I haven't figured it out yet!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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This is very cute and so fitting for the site, Every word written is so true, what do we want from fanstory? beats me, I haven't figured it out yet!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. If you are serious about writing - you will get help with 'grooming' it for presentation. Plus it is addictive...
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Thank you for your good review. If you are serious about writing - you will get help with 'grooming' it for presentation. Plus it is addictive...
Comment from sunnilicious
Muddle me a mojito. I like that word. It just made word of the week. Nice poem. GOod artwork. Perfect combination. Excellent.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Muddle me a mojito. I like that word. It just made word of the week. Nice poem. GOod artwork. Perfect combination. Excellent.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your good review. CG
Comment from PraileighCormac
I love how this goes along with the sight, and is very clever! You did a remarkable job of rhyming as well! You are a very bright writer!
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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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I love how this goes along with the sight, and is very clever! You did a remarkable job of rhyming as well! You are a very bright writer!
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reviewing my work, your time is appreciated.
I see from your profile that you're new to Fanstory. Welcome!
In case you didn't know it, the site offers a six star scale for ranking work. Here's a guideline:
Six Stars (Exceptional: Simply Outstanding)
Five Stars (Excellent: Enjoyable and no revisions needed)
Four Stars (Good: Adjustments needed)
Three Stars (Below average)
Two Stars (Below Average: Needs lots of work)
One Star (Poor: Major revision required)
Since your 4 star rating of this piece indicates 'Adjustments needed', would you please be so kind as to clarify for me what, specifically, the adjustments are that you deem needed to improve the work?
Comment from Poetic Friend
Okay, you described life at Fanstory quite well. This diddy was quite fun to read.
Tom should use this poem as an introduction to Fanstory, for it summarizes and provides direction to the site.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Okay, you described life at Fanstory quite well. This diddy was quite fun to read.
Tom should use this poem as an introduction to Fanstory, for it summarizes and provides direction to the site.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Thank you, my Poetic Friend! For your good review... and idea too.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi, this hit the nail on the head, not only was it creative but very well constructed,it was good fun and I had a chuckle as I was told this when I first started, loved your truthful entry hope you do well my friend. Regards J.J.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Hi, this hit the nail on the head, not only was it creative but very well constructed,it was good fun and I had a chuckle as I was told this when I first started, loved your truthful entry hope you do well my friend. Regards J.J.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much! Much appreciated, this is very special. xx
