Comment from cherylmelwoods

Excellent

This group sounds very beneficial Richard ... A place to talk and share, as horrible as the stories must be.... Talking is therapeutic for the Soul, especially being surrounded in a like-minded group where you have all suffered.

Your description of what you did is very explicit. I would have to take pills Richard, if I was ever to do it. And just put myself to sleep forever, gently.

Keep and stay strong,

Cheryl

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A review from a site Goddess...
THe Miss adwepearl!!!
I'm a shak'in{my second.}
beautiful descriptive detail and a haunting, poignant tone
marshmellows should be marshmallows
good alliteration in do your dance
excellent use of personification
good alliteration in skirt the surface
and in skip and skirt
strong expression of emotion, too
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Comment from GroundedAngel

Excellent

I see pain and anger which combined in an unstable emotional state could reasonably lead to suicide. Of course, don't forget meds. Ever listen to the warnings on Antidepressants ? Gee, aren't we suppose to take them to KEEP from KILLING ourselves if we fall so far into despair. Suicide is a touchy subject that makes some people uncomfortable discussing. I thought the poem was very profound.

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Been there, been experimented with like some piece of shit dolly, here chew on a few...
4...your... wviewing...pleasures.
Wash it down with a shot or two...
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Over the Counter Drug Affliction and Addiction
"How I Want To Kill YOU!" by Ricky1024
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I have RSD a form of
fibramigeria but he is
Oxycotin!
And all he wants to do is KILL YOU!
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Take me when ya shake, rattle, and roll.
Flush it down with alcohol, the stronger
the better you bed-wetter!
I want to deceive and make ya believe...
Here's some antivan and use it sparingly.
Nope!
Because this is dope!!!
And it's OK.
...
Take it with your Rice Krispies and then
ya can swallow me all at once!
All six of me!
Then you will see and learn my tricks...

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"Addiction is a quaint and silent, creeping
maladity.
It happens with an un-wanting care as you
travel down the spiral stair!"
Author Notes
This was written September 25th, 2012
at a "Journey to Wellness" counseling
"Double Trouble Group."
I am an accepted speaker as I was raised
with alcoholic parents at birth.
I am also bi-polar, manic-depressive with an
occasional psychotic syndrome{no sleep.}
This was well received and written in less then five minutes.
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Comment from Irene D. Garces

Excellent

I appreciate the poet for making this piece regarding what it is like to attempt a suicide. The message is quite weird and the artwork is more weirdo.

But the poet's perfect illustration / description of suicide made suicide a very dreadful act and should be avoided.

Very well done.

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Thanks and something a little more on the brighter side.
Ricky1024
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The Angel Faith
Faith
The One-Winged Angel by Ricky1024
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Prologue Prologue 2 3






















































On the day that you were born God created
a Heavenly Great One with Godly features.
He Said...
"You are one of my Heavenly creatures."

The Angels gave to her a halo of gold that was many eons old.
They gave to you his Wisdom and insight that makes you most perfect and alright.
And after exhausting with his very last breath, the angels let you go before both of your wings could grow.

One was stubbed, snowing white that tickled when rubbed in that place that's just right. When wrapped around you it gave a sense of well being that you found comforting, a sensual feeling.
In addition it gave to you warmth, security, and this heavenly, gentle touch that meant to you so very, very much!
Could this mistake or error by God be possibly a small glitch like that of someone that was left in the darkness after the downward click of the switch?

This nub or stub of a wing was so small, in accordance to God's angel wing design a rarity or a one of a kind?
It's just the beginning of a wing that was supposed to be but does everything always have to just be?
Just be so very perfect, be so very right, and is heaven actually the training grounds where all of Gods holy, guardian angels including, the new one-winged angel, has learned to compensate and take flight?













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Faith will be sent on many missions dispelling the Earths woes.
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