Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

True Friend? or Not!

True friend from foe is identifiable, if you tell your problem friend responds, enemy react.
You will know later when your friend assume your problems.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012

Thanks for encouraging!

Comment from mumsyone

Average

Oops! Your poem is not a 5-7-5. The 5-7-5 calls for 3 lines only, of 5, 7, and 5 syllables (not words). I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.

Know a friend from foe (5 syllables)
Tell your problems and your poverty show (10 syllables)
Soon ye shall know! (4 syllables)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012

Thanks for the feedback, shall surely rectify the same, thanks again!

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

How true that as soon as you tell something of yourself to someone you will find out if they are a true friend or not. Good read, good job and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012

Thanks for the encouraging words