Beware
verses comparing two contrasted eras2 total reviews
Comment from doris1022
The photo is just beautiful.... and the bright blue sky. the wording of the poem could use better flow it seems too choppy. the ideas are great thoughts!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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The photo is just beautiful.... and the bright blue sky. the wording of the poem could use better flow it seems too choppy. the ideas are great thoughts!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thanks doris for the feedback. I was writing in a hurry, writing just to participate. It was somewhat impropmtu! Next time, I promise, it will be finer.
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Thanks a lot Doris
Comment from anarush
I loved this mysterious and philosophical poem.It gives me the impression that life is over for this poet.Very well and poetically written .I loved words like:"Deranged,unhappy,astray." How many of us have felt like this throughout life finding no way out.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I loved this mysterious and philosophical poem.It gives me the impression that life is over for this poet.Very well and poetically written .I loved words like:"Deranged,unhappy,astray." How many of us have felt like this throughout life finding no way out.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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The opposite anarush. As you may notice, the poet is ruing the past gloomy era and now is starting a new shiny one!Thanks 4 the feedback.
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Thanks a lot Anarush.
