All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I'm Possessed"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
42 total reviews
Comment from zlp22
Interesting poem. Good word flow, easy to read.Bright color adds a lot to the poem. This type of poem is not easy to write.Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Interesting poem. Good word flow, easy to read.Bright color adds a lot to the poem. This type of poem is not easy to write.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx zlp!
Comment from Cornelius2000
What a good idea, finger-painting the sky. And I'm always so impressed with the pictures you authors come up with to complement your poems....this one is perfect. Nice Naani.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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What a good idea, finger-painting the sky. And I'm always so impressed with the pictures you authors come up with to complement your poems....this one is perfect. Nice Naani.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Then may I ask you to explain your 4 star rating please Dave? You've just said it's perfect and then given 4 stars??? am I being obtuse, or what dear?????
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Oooops....sorry Sharyn, stayed up too late and accidentaly hit the wrong button. My apologies....correction made. Dave
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well I WAS scratching my head Dave - didn't think it was THAT bad! :) S
Comment from shanat
before even reading the poem i thought the picture said it all! thanks very much for posting i liked it alot and i hope it goes well for you:)
cheers, shanat
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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before even reading the poem i thought the picture said it all! thanks very much for posting i liked it alot and i hope it goes well for you:)
cheers, shanat
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx shanat!
Comment from Curly Girly
It seems to fit the criteria. I love the colours you have chosen for the words. And the image is excellent. It is bright and attractive. An original thoughtful approach.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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It seems to fit the criteria. I love the colours you have chosen for the words. And the image is excellent. It is bright and attractive. An original thoughtful approach.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx so much CG!
Comment from Charlene0513
A Naani poem expressing one's innocence and care-free way.
Good alliteration used and expressive movements towards the gift of life. Very bright imagery.
Charlene
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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A Naani poem expressing one's innocence and care-free way.
Good alliteration used and expressive movements towards the gift of life. Very bright imagery.
Charlene
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx so much Charlene - glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from c_lucas
Beautiful poem. I love the expression, "Fingerpainting the sky." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, makig for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Beautiful poem. I love the expression, "Fingerpainting the sky." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, makig for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thx charlie!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alexmi1984
One word can describe
The joy that exits this scribe
And that word is beautiful
To which I add that I am thankful
To read such a poetic masterpiece
Create another one, please.
Alex :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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One word can describe
The joy that exits this scribe
And that word is beautiful
To which I add that I am thankful
To read such a poetic masterpiece
Create another one, please.
Alex :)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thank you so much Alex - :) I will be happy to create another!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Wow! Your illustration is an explosion of color and exuberance. What a lovely way to illustrate your imaginative naani. I like the "finger-painting the sky" image. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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Wow! Your illustration is an explosion of color and exuberance. What a lovely way to illustrate your imaginative naani. I like the "finger-painting the sky" image. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
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thank you so much Nancy - I love it that you got the message of this one! :)
Comment from adewpearl
Stunning illustration and presentation of your poem
Your poem of 24 syllables in 4 lines is in excellent naani form
good consonance of S sounds in all four lines
good alliterative grouping of P words
I just love the imagery of fingerpainting a sunset and i love your exuberant tone :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Stunning illustration and presentation of your poem
Your poem of 24 syllables in 4 lines is in excellent naani form
good consonance of S sounds in all four lines
good alliterative grouping of P words
I just love the imagery of fingerpainting a sunset and i love your exuberant tone :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Brooke!
Comment from seren james
This is presented beautifully. I take this to be a metaphor for good times and we have to join in..
The imagery created by a few syllables is truly breathtaking. Good contest entry.The picture is really something.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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This is presented beautifully. I take this to be a metaphor for good times and we have to join in..
The imagery created by a few syllables is truly breathtaking. Good contest entry.The picture is really something.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx seren! I've had this picture on my desktop for a few weeks now, waiting for the words to appear! :)
