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All Those Puzzling Pieces

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What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

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Comment from Dawn Munro
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Okay, am I really this far behind in my reading? I don't think so! This is stunning, Sharyn, and I haven't seen this one either!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
    thx Dawn - it was originally for the naani competition last week I think - I liked it too, glad you did! :) It didn't win :( oh well ...
reply by Dawn Munro on 24-Sep-2012
    I've pretty much given up on those too.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
    I just write them for myself as I enjoy the challenge of a prompt - but I no longer vote in the booths, so I have no idea who wins unless I receive a PM which says "Congratulations" - I was surprised last week to receive $90 for the Spirituality one (my Santa Claus/Jesus poem, which I thought most people hated because I got lots of lectures on how naughty I was for that one too) ... win some, lose some, ho hum ...
reply by Dawn Munro on 24-Sep-2012
    Not from me - I loved it! (I must be naughty too!) :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
    oh naughty is good - shake up the God Squad the Dorothy Dix/Aunt Abby crew a bit! :)
Comment from Mai Mai
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Very inspirational. I love the economy of words and the powerful image relayed as a result. This is very good work. Also, I too, enjoy a good sunset. Good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx mai mai!
Comment from hari anand
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Dear visionary1234 I loved this nani poetry prompt entry of your like all other poetries you post , very colourful just like you, loved it.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thank you my dear - this was an easy one to write, as that pic had been on my desktop for a few weeks, just waiting for the words to come along ... :) Sharyn
Comment from Kingsland
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Sometimes nature presents the best artistry of all. You found an excellent picture for your short poetic presentation. I enjoyed reading this excellent thoughts process... John

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thanks John!
Comment from Angels27
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A lovely picture and a very beautiful Naani poem. The energy in the lines just ooze out. Finger painting the sky is so different. It made very good reading. Enjoyed it immensely.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx Angels!
Comment from Dklrdmcches
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This was very nicely written. You were able to convey the message of joy and of reaching for your dreams. Great imagery was felt as your well crafted words spoke with a tone full of joy. Great job...dark lord

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    Thanks Dklrd! :)
Comment from justatuna
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I wondered why I didn't see this in my messages. Another great job. You have such a unique style. Every time I read your work I feel better. It's like your personality comes through. Great job my friend.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx so much Tuna! :) Sharyn
Comment from misscookie
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The artwork goes well with your poem.And I love how your words flow.
You capture my attentiopn all the way
I thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx misscookie!
Comment from Gungalo
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Oh the thrill of it all. Finger painting the sky is fun and will make you feel as if you are possessed. Just don't ever let it go!!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx Gungalo!
reply by Gungalo on 21-Sep-2012
    y pleasure.
Comment from sunnilicious
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Lovely artwork. Wonderful Naani Poem. Whimsical and loving. Well thought out. Nicely written with descriptive phrases creating good imagery. Excellent.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2012


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2012
    thx sunni ... :)