Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Reggie the Rat is in Danger!"Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
42 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I'm sorry I cvan't help you for Idon't know about this or many other forms of poerty.
Al;l I know I found this top be a very interesting read. and the truth be tol;d humamns are destroy all our beautifu; land.
thamnk you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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I'm sorry I cvan't help you for Idon't know about this or many other forms of poerty.
Al;l I know I found this top be a very interesting read. and the truth be tol;d humamns are destroy all our beautifu; land.
thamnk you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your really lovely review, Miss Cookie, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Sandra xsx
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Your very welcome.
Comment from artemis53
Good for you putting that in your author notes, Sandra. Whenever I get a review reply and the words are in them, I will report it to Tom.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Good for you putting that in your author notes, Sandra. Whenever I get a review reply and the words are in them, I will report it to Tom.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you Diane, it's nice to know I have your support! Sandra. xsx :~)
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Thanks for entering, Sandra.
Terrific story of Reggie the Rat's close shave with Man's carelessness. Though I may have had more sympathy for, say, 'Monty the Mouse', LOL, I still felt Reggies plight, as would all kids, as it's written cutely but with serious overtones.
Thankfully a happy ending with Oswald and Dad coming to Reggie's rescue, but enough potential danger to make kids think twice about dumping litter.
Excellent write.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thanks for entering, Sandra.
Terrific story of Reggie the Rat's close shave with Man's carelessness. Though I may have had more sympathy for, say, 'Monty the Mouse', LOL, I still felt Reggies plight, as would all kids, as it's written cutely but with serious overtones.
Thankfully a happy ending with Oswald and Dad coming to Reggie's rescue, but enough potential danger to make kids think twice about dumping litter.
Excellent write.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely words, Ray! I really enjoyed entering your contest, win or lose, it was fun! Sandra. :~)
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Thanks very much, Sandra. There sure is some strong competition.
I just posted my entry. Hint, hint. :-) x
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Just read it! Amazing! xsx
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Thanks very much, Sandra. I'll reply to reviews tomorrow. xx
Comment from Gungalo
Very good Sandra for it will lead the kids in a fury to help make sure the wrong kinds of debris are contained so as not to injure or kill animals.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Very good Sandra for it will lead the kids in a fury to help make sure the wrong kinds of debris are contained so as not to injure or kill animals.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you Gungalo, I hope you are right! Thank you for the lovely review! Sandra xsx
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Well with kids it's tough.
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I'm fine girl. HOpe you are too.
Comment from adewpearl
strong rhyming couplets and a good steady cadence
excellent alliteration in sniff to see how it smelt
This is a compelling story that illustrates a large problem in a way children can relate to by focusing on how this problem affects one sympathetic animal :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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strong rhyming couplets and a good steady cadence
excellent alliteration in sniff to see how it smelt
This is a compelling story that illustrates a large problem in a way children can relate to by focusing on how this problem affects one sympathetic animal :-) Brooke
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much, Brooke, for your wonderful review! :) Sandra.
Comment from rama devi
Nice entry for this contest with simple language a child can absorb, delivered with fine bouncy beat (mixed meter works fine) and easy-flowing rhymes. I did think the word HE a bit over repeated, but it works fine in a kid's style poem, probably?
An imaginative entry. Good description of man's littering...
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Nice entry for this contest with simple language a child can absorb, delivered with fine bouncy beat (mixed meter works fine) and easy-flowing rhymes. I did think the word HE a bit over repeated, but it works fine in a kid's style poem, probably?
An imaginative entry. Good description of man's littering...
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you, Rama, I did think about changing a few of the 'he's' but then I thought it gave it the bounce that children like. (hopefully!!) Thanks again for your lovely review! Sandra. xsx
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Yes, it does add bounce! ;-) Love, rd xoxo
Comment from EMB
Sandra, this is a rather charming poem, but not just for kids. We adults need this message as well, don't we? You bet we do. I can definitely see this poem in a children's book.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Sandra, this is a rather charming poem, but not just for kids. We adults need this message as well, don't we? You bet we do. I can definitely see this poem in a children's book.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, and such kind words. I would like everyone to see how much we hurt our world and our little cuddly friends. Thank you! xsx
Comment from Scribbler67
What a lovely bouncy, rhythmical poem I'm sure children of all ages would love. I know I did, but then, I never grew up! Not only does it amuse and entertain, it also tells a rather moving story.
I like the way you have incorporated two lessons or morals in the verses; how we should help each other in times of difficulty, and the consequences of not caring for the environment.
Most enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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What a lovely bouncy, rhythmical poem I'm sure children of all ages would love. I know I did, but then, I never grew up! Not only does it amuse and entertain, it also tells a rather moving story.
I like the way you have incorporated two lessons or morals in the verses; how we should help each other in times of difficulty, and the consequences of not caring for the environment.
Most enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much, Scribbler, for the lovely review and the good luck! I am so pleased you enjoyed it! xsx
Comment from msmadeleine
I enjoyed your poem and I'm sure littlies would too.
There were so many rules, and whether you followed them or not, you've written a cute poem with a good message.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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I enjoyed your poem and I'm sure littlies would too.
There were so many rules, and whether you followed them or not, you've written a cute poem with a good message.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review! I hope I have! i'm so pleased you liked it! Sandra. xsx
Comment from jmdg1954
If I had greater then six I would gladly give you one. I thought this was incredibly well written! The story line was perfect, the rhyming and cadence was spot on, nothing forced! The last stanza told it like it is.... Pollution hurts...!!!! Very well done. John
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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If I had greater then six I would gladly give you one. I thought this was incredibly well written! The story line was perfect, the rhyming and cadence was spot on, nothing forced! The last stanza told it like it is.... Pollution hurts...!!!! Very well done. John
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
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Goodness! Thank you so very much for the lovely review and the super 6!! I am so very plesed you liked it. Sandra. xsx
