BooBoo Goes Cuckoo
A Halloween story27 total reviews
Comment from donaldww
This is a cute story as told by BooBoo. (I had a dog called Bimbo when I was around 3 yo.)
This black cat has a ghoulish look, and treats Halloween guests in impishly. Nevertheless, Booboo is effective in scaring off witches and the like.
With Booboo around, we can get back to other activities!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This is a cute story as told by BooBoo. (I had a dog called Bimbo when I was around 3 yo.)
This black cat has a ghoulish look, and treats Halloween guests in impishly. Nevertheless, Booboo is effective in scaring off witches and the like.
With Booboo around, we can get back to other activities!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hahah...a dog called Bimbo! He must have been a funny dog. Thanks for reading about BooBoo and enjoying her tale. Elaine
Comment from speakup
This cat looks like he feels, wow the pic hit me right away very good one. I'm sure they feel bad about the crop but have not the tools to protest,very good write it was great. Ron
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This cat looks like he feels, wow the pic hit me right away very good one. I'm sure they feel bad about the crop but have not the tools to protest,very good write it was great. Ron
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thanks for reading and reviewing about BooBoo. Elaine
Comment from juliedickson55
Really funny and clever. I love the cat- he looks so miffed at hs haircut!
Nice phrasing and rhymes in your poem, it flows along well.
I think this would appeal to children as well.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Really funny and clever. I love the cat- he looks so miffed at hs haircut!
Nice phrasing and rhymes in your poem, it flows along well.
I think this would appeal to children as well.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from jknc
This poem made me laugh and grin like an evil pumpkin. That poor kitty!! The expression on its face is so typical of any cat. I can just imagine my cats running around chasing skeletons on Halloween. I always wondered what they were howling at in the middle of the night.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This poem made me laugh and grin like an evil pumpkin. That poor kitty!! The expression on its face is so typical of any cat. I can just imagine my cats running around chasing skeletons on Halloween. I always wondered what they were howling at in the middle of the night.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Love your review! Thank you for taking time to read about BooBoo.
Elaine
Comment from Shela Francis
That is so cute! I love it, and his/her eyes is the color of a pumpkin very nice. And that is so true it seems like everyone is frighten of a black cat it's crazy, but I can see the point of the hair cut. Very funny I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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That is so cute! I love it, and his/her eyes is the color of a pumpkin very nice. And that is so true it seems like everyone is frighten of a black cat it's crazy, but I can see the point of the hair cut. Very funny I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this my friend a very amusing story in this poem this poor kitty cat you brought him to life well I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Yes I liked this my friend a very amusing story in this poem this poor kitty cat you brought him to life well I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from natureist
Love the piece very much ,earthy and misty moon eyed ,love cats ,witches gools -the whole package -//*,those skelletons need to get alife ha ha ,more please
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Love the piece very much ,earthy and misty moon eyed ,love cats ,witches gools -the whole package -//*,those skelletons need to get alife ha ha ,more please
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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I love your review! Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from writesinsonnets
This is cute, I don't usually read Halloween poems, but this caught my eye, and I'm glad I went into it 'cause it is sooooooooooooooooooo cute........and it flows well. Would you consider adding punctuation?
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my lovely self is
defiled by this awful
haircut
so here I sit on Halloween
not my holiday
I was born on Christmas
a time of singing
not a time for screaming--------I love the above part of your stanza............so cute
this funky night full
of sweets and ghouls
makes me want to go
postal
so off I scamper
chasing the little witches
as they fly into the
night sky
away from the hairless
feline
the werewolf takes one
look at me
and hides behind Duchess
the family poodle
he quakes with fear
at my new do
I stick my tongue out
he wimpers and howls----spell check says wimpers should be WHIMPERS
for his mother
the skeletons dance out
of the graveyard
but seeing a hairless
kitty
they fall onto each other
creating a pile of bones---------so cute
I am beside myself
looking this way
I growl and hiss at
the Halloween characters
they run in fear
my mistress calls me
BooBoo! Stop picking on
the ghosts and ghouls!
But I am too busy chasing
a jack-o-lantern around our yard
finally, calm and collected
I rub against my favorite
scratching post
covered in catnip
over I collapse---perhaps omit OVER
leaving Halloween to go
on in peace
as the skeletons collect themselves
and run into the night.---GOOD JOB
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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This is cute, I don't usually read Halloween poems, but this caught my eye, and I'm glad I went into it 'cause it is sooooooooooooooooooo cute........and it flows well. Would you consider adding punctuation?
scroll down
my lovely self is
defiled by this awful
haircut
so here I sit on Halloween
not my holiday
I was born on Christmas
a time of singing
not a time for screaming--------I love the above part of your stanza............so cute
this funky night full
of sweets and ghouls
makes me want to go
postal
so off I scamper
chasing the little witches
as they fly into the
night sky
away from the hairless
feline
the werewolf takes one
look at me
and hides behind Duchess
the family poodle
he quakes with fear
at my new do
I stick my tongue out
he wimpers and howls----spell check says wimpers should be WHIMPERS
for his mother
the skeletons dance out
of the graveyard
but seeing a hairless
kitty
they fall onto each other
creating a pile of bones---------so cute
I am beside myself
looking this way
I growl and hiss at
the Halloween characters
they run in fear
my mistress calls me
BooBoo! Stop picking on
the ghosts and ghouls!
But I am too busy chasing
a jack-o-lantern around our yard
finally, calm and collected
I rub against my favorite
scratching post
covered in catnip
over I collapse---perhaps omit OVER
leaving Halloween to go
on in peace
as the skeletons collect themselves
and run into the night.---GOOD JOB
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I like your suggestions and would consider adding punctuation.
Thank you for a gret review and taking time to discuss improvements. Elaine
Comment from lakeport
Boo Boo a devilish lookiong kitty, a spooky Halloween kitty,
a very nice expressed story poem, nice flow. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Boo Boo a devilish lookiong kitty, a spooky Halloween kitty,
a very nice expressed story poem, nice flow. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thanks for reading about Booboo. She is out of her element on Halloween. Elaine
Comment from EMB
LOL Wow. This was very entertaining to read. If I didn't know better, I'd say that the poem was written AFTER finding the picture. Either way, one definitely compliments the other.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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LOL Wow. This was very entertaining to read. If I didn't know better, I'd say that the poem was written AFTER finding the picture. Either way, one definitely compliments the other.
Nice job.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I wanted to write a Halloween poem about an unusual cat and went searching for a pic. The shaved Persian was perfect. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
