Comment from juliedickson55

Excellent

Gruesome and intriguing image.

Read this twice- I took it as the ghost of Titanic sending this message... some of these phrases are very unique and interesting.
"Visions of insane pictureless-pain announce
my tomb of demons. "
"My red blood paints a picture unperfect of sauce-
less menus, bland burgers, and soured fish."

I did wonder about your use of lowly sea, since this to me implied small? Perhaps lonely would work...

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks for the allocates Miss Julie.
lowly sea inplied my depths of pain.
I try to catch it all in the editor notes for understanding this writer can be a fruitless propositinally, spoctologically, unspoctological, illogical, undertaking
{Under} got-cha!
LOL!
Ricky1024
"The Ricketier"

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

Grappling with my demons and internal strife as you ponder your lost and tortured soul in emotional confusion and angst..excellent!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks, my friend and may you never, ever,
go down this one-way street.
Ricky1024