Comment from Jean Lutz

Exceptional

This is delightful. You whipped up perfection with only eight ingredients. Surely this will win. And if your own was not enough, you included artwork with cookies that melt in your sight.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks again for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Cute story! Bigfoot must have found the old man as scary as an old man would find him, but the man had the sense to know that different didn't mean enemy. Glad they had cookies and milk to share. :)

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks for taking time to read and enjoy. Elaine

Comment from Katherine2

Excellent

I really hope you win this contest. This was such a fun poem. I could see, smell, and taste the poem. The "skinny dipper" in the lilac towel made me laugh. The fir tree added a subtle quirkiness to the story. Great use of these words, a wonderful tale. Poor bear to faint, but I'm glad he kept the old man company! Good read. Katherine.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from elliejean

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. Big foot is fed Mile and cookies by a skinny and naked old man. The words took you to a fun place. Great work

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Thanks for a good laugh. I loved your unusual take on this contest entry. You've used all the words in such a unique way. I can imagine Bigfoot waking up to milk and cookies.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a quite creative and imaginative story, using the supplied words to good advantage. Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

Thanks for a great review and taking time to read this unusual poem. Elaine

Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

The Cookie Thief

There's a strange message on your poetry.
I like this.
Civilization should undergo considering
progress of apes and birds.
It is human to learn more about what best
attitude to behave being respectable even to animals.
We will know then why cookies are served.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012

I love your reviews. Thanks so much. Elaine