The Cookie Thief
Bigfoot couldn't resist27 total reviews
Comment from Alexmi1984
This poem's title got me on a hook, being a cookie fan myself. Then, I read the poem. I had images of hot, out-of-the-oven cookies as I was reading your well-written and, as far as I'm concerned, funny poem. And, to use an over-burnt cliche, I'd say that I enjoyed the first stanza the most. I enjoyed it all but this felt special, for me.
Alex.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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This poem's title got me on a hook, being a cookie fan myself. Then, I read the poem. I had images of hot, out-of-the-oven cookies as I was reading your well-written and, as far as I'm concerned, funny poem. And, to use an over-burnt cliche, I'd say that I enjoyed the first stanza the most. I enjoyed it all but this felt special, for me.
Alex.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Yes, I am a cookie fanatic myself. I am glad you enjoyed this unusal tale. Thank you so much for taking time to read. Elaine
Comment from writer_13
You did a good job including all the words that you needed and wrote an amusing poem. It told a nice story and I liked the ending. Cookies and milk are always good for breaking the ice and making new friends.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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You did a good job including all the words that you needed and wrote an amusing poem. It told a nice story and I liked the ending. Cookies and milk are always good for breaking the ice and making new friends.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from THEHISTORYMAKER
If big foot did exist and faint what a happy ending. If only all people could be like this old man. Show kindness when someone needs care instead of using a shotgun. For that reason I like this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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If big foot did exist and faint what a happy ending. If only all people could be like this old man. Show kindness when someone needs care instead of using a shotgun. For that reason I like this poem.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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I am honored by your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. You've done an excellent job in using those words. My favorite stanza is:
"Bigfoot faints, he is caught
the old nudist wraps a lilac
towel around his body
he bends over and fans a
magazine over the prone ape" This was a hoot as that happy owl would've said. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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LOL. You've done an excellent job in using those words. My favorite stanza is:
"Bigfoot faints, he is caught
the old nudist wraps a lilac
towel around his body
he bends over and fans a
magazine over the prone ape" This was a hoot as that happy owl would've said. Well done! Les
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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I am glad your found this to be funny. I appreciate your great review. Elaine
Comment from Gungalo
Very good quatrains Mermaids and quite the story. Imagine that? Cookies for big foot whenever he comes to visit. LOL. An awesome story.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Very good quatrains Mermaids and quite the story. Imagine that? Cookies for big foot whenever he comes to visit. LOL. An awesome story.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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Smile.
Comment from Curly Girly
What an odd tale! However, it was cute. Nothing better than a cuddle up to a hairy ape - I know, I'm married to one. Great fun. I hope it does well. I can see no need for corrections. I'm off to make him cookies now...
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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What an odd tale! However, it was cute. Nothing better than a cuddle up to a hairy ape - I know, I'm married to one. Great fun. I hope it does well. I can see no need for corrections. I'm off to make him cookies now...
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Haha, it must be great to be married to a hairy ape. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Thatguypk
A very, erm... unusual subject, but charmingly humorous. I think it skips from past to present tense about half way through. The required words are neatly embroidered into the story, creating a whimsical, but thoroughly enjoyable nonsense rhyme.
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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A very, erm... unusual subject, but charmingly humorous. I think it skips from past to present tense about half way through. The required words are neatly embroidered into the story, creating a whimsical, but thoroughly enjoyable nonsense rhyme.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Thanks for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from natureist
Very earthy with the freshness of the great out doors ,and the mysteriouse woodland creature reminds me if the primative yearning to return to the woodland and its ways and start again,leaving technology behind,enjoying -//*
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Very earthy with the freshness of the great out doors ,and the mysteriouse woodland creature reminds me if the primative yearning to return to the woodland and its ways and start again,leaving technology behind,enjoying -//*
Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, mermaids, I doubt these words took anyone else
to the place you went---and that's a compliment.
This is very imaginative.
I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
maybe 'like (a moth ) to flame--the ape is singular, the moth should be, too.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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Well, mermaids, I doubt these words took anyone else
to the place you went---and that's a compliment.
This is very imaginative.
I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
maybe 'like (a moth ) to flame--the ape is singular, the moth should be, too.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the suggestion, it makes sense. I am honored by your encouraging review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from cvcopac
This is crazy and funny and a bit poignant. Looks like you got all the required words in, easily. The narrative is great and the syntax is not bad but could use a little work. You probably wrote this in a flash. Nonetheless, excellent and I enjoyed it. cvc
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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This is crazy and funny and a bit poignant. Looks like you got all the required words in, easily. The narrative is great and the syntax is not bad but could use a little work. You probably wrote this in a flash. Nonetheless, excellent and I enjoyed it. cvc
Comment Written 18-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2012
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
