My Character Studies ... ! (Vol. 1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Professor"Metre ... Freeverse & Acrostic
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
I sense anger in this poem, sarcasm, disgust. Again, VERY poetic in form, very dramatic and well written. I think this style is your forte, personally.
Good work, Bic.
Av
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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I sense anger in this poem, sarcasm, disgust. Again, VERY poetic in form, very dramatic and well written. I think this style is your forte, personally.
Good work, Bic.
Av
Comment Written 02-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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That is exactly the point made, glad you enjoyed.
Comment from TammyGail
I like this poem B.. really I did - the message was there for the plucking and plucking I did - great use of imagery and clever use of wording - thanks for sharing always a pleasure
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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I like this poem B.. really I did - the message was there for the plucking and plucking I did - great use of imagery and clever use of wording - thanks for sharing always a pleasure
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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Thanks T...always appreciated.
Comment from Meta~Mark
Both hands found guilty, wandering misdemeanours in the night....Bic that line is awesome man, students of the devil and hypocrisy professor indeed!
BRAVO!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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Both hands found guilty, wandering misdemeanours in the night....Bic that line is awesome man, students of the devil and hypocrisy professor indeed!
BRAVO!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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That this one is my friend...glad you liked...LOL.
Comment from more2write
A very well captured thought that many of us have dealt with. Those in high places taking liberties to pass on their own ideals as fact to open vessels looking for enlightenment. They will be judged. Well done, more2write
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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A very well captured thought that many of us have dealt with. Those in high places taking liberties to pass on their own ideals as fact to open vessels looking for enlightenment. They will be judged. Well done, more2write
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2012
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Excellent, much appreciated.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I'm guessing you didn't like your teacher. Just kidding. It was a powerful poem. I liked the posing of philosophical questions to the professor. I liked the damnation and the hint of the seven deadly sins. Nice work.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012
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I'm guessing you didn't like your teacher. Just kidding. It was a powerful poem. I liked the posing of philosophical questions to the professor. I liked the damnation and the hint of the seven deadly sins. Nice work.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012
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Excellent, much obliged.
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Wow! Great work with this, and the clever insertion of Heaven and Hell imagery within the piece, as pride is considered to be one of the seven deadly sins. Very intelligent and well thought out use of vocabulary and craftsmanship. Holly
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012
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Wow! Great work with this, and the clever insertion of Heaven and Hell imagery within the piece, as pride is considered to be one of the seven deadly sins. Very intelligent and well thought out use of vocabulary and craftsmanship. Holly
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2012
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Thank you.
