All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Pull Up a Blue Chair"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from hari anand
Pull up a blue chair, Yes it is too easy to condemn others work, so, Build your wall but plant the garden,beautiful message! Liked it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Pull up a blue chair, Yes it is too easy to condemn others work, so, Build your wall but plant the garden,beautiful message! Liked it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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hey thanks Mba!!!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A terrific thought-provoking thought my friend. The answer should be that we the people have the power, but in reality those with money have great influence. We do all have our own garden to do with as we please and maybe ask another to join us. Written with much feeling!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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A terrific thought-provoking thought my friend. The answer should be that we the people have the power, but in reality those with money have great influence. We do all have our own garden to do with as we please and maybe ask another to join us. Written with much feeling!!! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Wow Deb! you're such a sweetie! thank you so much for your special '6' my dear!
with MUCH appreciation & hugest of hugs!
Sharyn
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Yes, I can see that this poem would suit a rendition in rap song. I like your internal rhyme... just enough to make me keep reading. Election times are always frustrating because you get the awfulr feeling that you're dammed if you do and you're dammed if you don't. Giddy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Yes, I can see that this poem would suit a rendition in rap song. I like your internal rhyme... just enough to make me keep reading. Election times are always frustrating because you get the awfulr feeling that you're dammed if you do and you're dammed if you don't. Giddy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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you've got that right! :)
Comment from Jean Lutz
I do not know whether to laugh or cry. We just got slammed by Hurricane Isaac this week. Millions and millions have been spent in this area on storm protection. This week surely showed us man's efforts don't calm the storm but merely redirects the path. And yes, both Obama and Romney have been here to "review" Isaac's work.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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I do not know whether to laugh or cry. We just got slammed by Hurricane Isaac this week. Millions and millions have been spent in this area on storm protection. This week surely showed us man's efforts don't calm the storm but merely redirects the path. And yes, both Obama and Romney have been here to "review" Isaac's work.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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I'll bet they have Jean - sorry to hear it! both about Isaac and about the two potential idiot presidents dear!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from Crystal Carey
Well fantastic poem. I really like the way you took it at the beginning, feeling angry and hopeless, to at the end saying only we can change it. Very hopeful. Good job!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Well fantastic poem. I really like the way you took it at the beginning, feeling angry and hopeless, to at the end saying only we can change it. Very hopeful. Good job!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much Crystal! I never believe in writing depressing poetry - always offer a solution - otherwise we'd all just slash our wrists, yes? A special thank you for your magic '6' on this one - I so appreciate it!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Janet Foor
This was a fun Slam Poem to read. You have a great talent of "tellin it like it is". I liked how you changed the tone and mood in the poem. Some nice alliteration which always make it flow smoother. I wish we could hear you read it. What fun that would be. Very nicely done.
Best always,
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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This was a fun Slam Poem to read. You have a great talent of "tellin it like it is". I liked how you changed the tone and mood in the poem. Some nice alliteration which always make it flow smoother. I wish we could hear you read it. What fun that would be. Very nicely done.
Best always,
Janet
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2012
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thanks so much my dear - hmmm ... yes, this one I will definitely perform!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Sharyn
For such a cute little shit, you are tougher than a hard boiled owl. Your word usage astounds me. You gots words in here that are above my pay grade. I tried it as ANGRY rap, it sounded just as bad. This is clever
Bear
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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Hey there Sharyn
For such a cute little shit, you are tougher than a hard boiled owl. Your word usage astounds me. You gots words in here that are above my pay grade. I tried it as ANGRY rap, it sounded just as bad. This is clever
Bear
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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You're so funny Big Bear! I can be shitty sometimes, I must admit - but "hard boiled OWL?" Now you TOTALLY crack my egg! Angry rap can be good can't it, just so long as it's GOOD "rap" and not CRAP rap!!! ??? :))))))))))
Comment from Opal H.
What an effective poem! Venting out all anger and rage, then putting in seeds of good wisdom at the end. Hopefully, poeple get it in their heads, finally...but even if a couple of people do, it's worth it, right?
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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What an effective poem! Venting out all anger and rage, then putting in seeds of good wisdom at the end. Hopefully, poeple get it in their heads, finally...but even if a couple of people do, it's worth it, right?
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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thx Opal!
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
An excellent script for a slam-bam give a damn speel about what's going on in this world. I found myself visualizing you on stage and enjoying, with amazement, what I was hearing you rail about. Things are in a helluva mess and you are letting them know what you think about it. Bob
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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An excellent script for a slam-bam give a damn speel about what's going on in this world. I found myself visualizing you on stage and enjoying, with amazement, what I was hearing you rail about. Things are in a helluva mess and you are letting them know what you think about it. Bob
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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thx Bob - yes, I'd have a blast performing this one my friend! :) Sharyn
Comment from Earthwriter
very dark and evil piece but that is what government has become with people like sheep watching the demise and believing what media puts forth well done
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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very dark and evil piece but that is what government has become with people like sheep watching the demise and believing what media puts forth well done
Comment Written 03-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2012
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you've got that right E. - never without hope though, right? :)Sharyn
