All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Three Faces of Love"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
60 total reviews
Comment from juliedickson55
YES.
"the fierce love of a mother
nurturing her child, a love that never leaves
though that child may grow up
and flee the safety net of protection,
that gossamer thread of connection
always runs, implanted deep, from heart to heart"
So true.
Nicely stated.
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
  |
YES.
"the fierce love of a mother
nurturing her child, a love that never leaves
though that child may grow up
and flee the safety net of protection,
that gossamer thread of connection
always runs, implanted deep, from heart to heart"
So true.
Nicely stated.
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thx so much jd!
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is a wonderful poem - it is eloquent, beautifully romantic, deeply touching and full of fine phrases like "without condition, and more than life itself", "the whole wide world becomes part of our aura" and "nanosecond orbs and trails of white light". The presentation of it is stunning as well.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
This is a wonderful poem - it is eloquent, beautifully romantic, deeply touching and full of fine phrases like "without condition, and more than life itself", "the whole wide world becomes part of our aura" and "nanosecond orbs and trails of white light". The presentation of it is stunning as well.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thx so much Dawn!
-
You are most welcome - I couldn't give a six, although I tried. I don't know who you are because of the blind entry requirement, but I wanted you to know how much I thought of your entry - good luck!
-
well you'll find out soon enough - and FS only allows 2 x 6's per month for one writer - I guess to encourage reading and rating new writers - but I'll take your virtual, no problem! :)
-
:)
Comment from honeytree
Wonderful art work and words.
Love is the greatest gift we can share
Loving and helping one another.
The gift of love we receive
Helps us all within our lives.
Love is a gift from God.
He is love and loves us all.
The spiritual love and care
That has been given to us
Will be with us forever.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
 |
Wonderful art work and words.
Love is the greatest gift we can share
Loving and helping one another.
The gift of love we receive
Helps us all within our lives.
Love is a gift from God.
He is love and loves us all.
The spiritual love and care
That has been given to us
Will be with us forever.
Honey tree
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thank you honeytree - and bless you for your special '6' - so much appreciated - and of course, this is a wonderful subject to contemplate and write about, yes?
Comment from poesyapprentice
I liked that in this poem you wrote of three types of love for the contest instead of simply just one type. It was a bit long and could have been more concise and still been as meaningfull but there was some good descriptive phrases thruout, especially in the second verse. good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
I liked that in this poem you wrote of three types of love for the contest instead of simply just one type. It was a bit long and could have been more concise and still been as meaningfull but there was some good descriptive phrases thruout, especially in the second verse. good luck!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thx so much poesy!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hmmm - won't let me give you six stars....
This is a fine entry for the contest and I am sure it will do well. Although technically free verse, there is solid structure here in your stanza format. There is rhyme too, both end rhyme and a thread of internal rhyme popping up in surorising places.
Above all there is a thoughtful and beautiful description of the three types of love. very, very nice.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
Hmmm - won't let me give you six stars....
This is a fine entry for the contest and I am sure it will do well. Although technically free verse, there is solid structure here in your stanza format. There is rhyme too, both end rhyme and a thread of internal rhyme popping up in surorising places.
Above all there is a thoughtful and beautiful description of the three types of love. very, very nice.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thanks so much kiwi! I think FS will only let you give 2 x 6's to one author per month if I remember correctly - but hey, I'll take the virtual, no problem. So glad you enjoyed!
Comment from sunnilicious
Well, I'm always game to hear the psychology perspective about love and relationships. I might remember some of this stuff from Bonkers and/or Psychology Today Magazines.
Verse 1: umbilical cord syndrome
Verse 2: cold feet / fear of love even when in it
Verse 3: love of the spirit and God
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
Well, I'm always game to hear the psychology perspective about love and relationships. I might remember some of this stuff from Bonkers and/or Psychology Today Magazines.
Verse 1: umbilical cord syndrome
Verse 2: cold feet / fear of love even when in it
Verse 3: love of the spirit and God
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
you've got it sunni!
Good night!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
An awesome write on the tree faces of love. Very well written and I especially like the last stanza. Excellent free verse. Good luck in the contest!!! DEbbie
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
An awesome write on the tree faces of love. Very well written and I especially like the last stanza. Excellent free verse. Good luck in the contest!!! DEbbie
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
thx Deb!
Comment from Gungalo
You definitely wrote of the three faces of love here and told what each one does. It's amazing that you can see this but it is also very true.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
You definitely wrote of the three faces of love here and told what each one does. It's amazing that you can see this but it is also very true.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
"amazing" hmm? guess so Gungalo! :)
-
Smile.
Comment from Amazingelectron
Great poem. Each stanza seems to have a different focus and that is part of its strength. One of the reasons that I love it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
Great poem. Each stanza seems to have a different focus and that is part of its strength. One of the reasons that I love it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
well blessings - and so glad you love it too! what's not to love about a prompt on love, hmm? :)
Comment from gerard71680
i Love this. its deep and insightful. I always say love is a big weapon. i often imagine if this was a world of more love what you described then this world will be a more better place great work.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
|
i Love this. its deep and insightful. I always say love is a big weapon. i often imagine if this was a world of more love what you described then this world will be a more better place great work.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
-
and I agree wholeheartedly my dear! thank you so very much for your magic '6'! LOVE it and blessings to you in all forms of love!
Sharyn
-
no problem you deserved it. GOd Bless
