SmILe
simple & short description of a smile.3 total reviews
Comment from terry drake
5-7-5 verse format challenge requires that the syllable count on the first and third line have 5 syllables and seven on the second line. You have a 4-6-4.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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5-7-5 verse format challenge requires that the syllable count on the first and third line have 5 syllables and seven on the second line. You have a 4-6-4.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thanks for ur sincere review.
Comment from c_lucas
A sincere smile will brighten up the receiver's day. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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A sincere smile will brighten up the receiver's day. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thanks for ur sincere review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from adewpearl
You have misread the directions for the 5/7/5 contest
Your three lines have to have a syllable count of 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the third, but your syllable count is
4/6/4
I like your use of alliteration and your thoughtful depiction of a smile :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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You have misread the directions for the 5/7/5 contest
Your three lines have to have a syllable count of 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the third, but your syllable count is
4/6/4
I like your use of alliteration and your thoughtful depiction of a smile :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2012
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thanks for ur sincere reply.
