The Devil's Name is Joey
This is a TRUE story.42 total reviews
Comment from Charlene0513
You attacked this story with much venom and the adrenalin seemed to be striking , at first but you lost me after you went home the zeal and devilish acts that I thought would escalate to never did.
That is why I am only giving you a four rating on this work.
Charlene
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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You attacked this story with much venom and the adrenalin seemed to be striking , at first but you lost me after you went home the zeal and devilish acts that I thought would escalate to never did.
That is why I am only giving you a four rating on this work.
Charlene
Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Sorry to disappoint, Charlene, but that's the thing with true stories... you can't change them. I'd understand if you didn't like the writing, or my approach to telling this weird experience, but marking me down on content seems strange. There's just nothing I could do about it, but tell a different story. I'm guessing you thought it was fiction, and was not impressed.... Now how do you feel?
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My apologies , but yes I did think it was just a fiction write-up. I did not read the fore mentioned I will make the appropriate changes.
Charlene
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Thank you so much, Charlene... But I'm even more thankful the devilish acts didn't actually escalate like you wanted. LOL
Comment from Selestia
Whoa! Creepy story even if it's not true, but the fact that it's true makes it all the more CREEPY. How grateful you must be that you made the right decision. I can't even begin to imagine the depth of your relief and the freedom you must have felt since that night. Your frustration that led to the encounter is very apparent. Simply flushing the pack down the commode . . . that one small act . . . saved you. Aren't you glad you didn't find Joey again? Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Whoa! Creepy story even if it's not true, but the fact that it's true makes it all the more CREEPY. How grateful you must be that you made the right decision. I can't even begin to imagine the depth of your relief and the freedom you must have felt since that night. Your frustration that led to the encounter is very apparent. Simply flushing the pack down the commode . . . that one small act . . . saved you. Aren't you glad you didn't find Joey again? Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2012
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Yes, I'm very lucky. The fact that my girlfriend, who had been determined to use that night with or without me, fell asleep waiting for me to come back... and I had only been gone a half hour, mind you, makes me think there was another force at work too... something GOOD fighting the thing I obviously encountered. The irony is that the Evil force worked on me, who was the reluctant one, while the Good force worked on Gina, who had basically extorted me into doing what was against my nature.
Strangest thing ever, that old woman denying up and down that there was no party...creepy is right.
Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it.
