All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "You are ... Are you?"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from pickthorn
A delightful and humerous poem that takes us from the age of a young hippie with beads and weeds to the older generation of a slower pace but still with flower power culture.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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A delightful and humerous poem that takes us from the age of a young hippie with beads and weeds to the older generation of a slower pace but still with flower power culture.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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thx so much pt!
Comment from kashmayank
It was awesome and deserved to win the contest,such a beautiful concept potrayed through poem I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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It was awesome and deserved to win the contest,such a beautiful concept potrayed through poem I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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Wow! thank you so much for your magic '6'! You've well and truly made my morning ... and you've got the ... beads ... baby ... :) Sharyn
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I was a child of the sixties (teenager during sixties) who merely smelled the joints (never grew or partook) while wearing clothes--including the hated bra, still hate the things!--but I can relate to this poem because I know all these elements were part of the era. Very good- creative and entertaining
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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I was a child of the sixties (teenager during sixties) who merely smelled the joints (never grew or partook) while wearing clothes--including the hated bra, still hate the things!--but I can relate to this poem because I know all these elements were part of the era. Very good- creative and entertaining
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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me too Janice - didn't smoke a thing, never have - probably one of the select few! thx so much for reading & being entertained! :) Sharyn
Comment from kes Penny
oh this could gain a cult following. What a shame that it is all so true. Love is not free oh my oh me! You deserved the winning for this. I have so much to learn and gain from reading works by such talent as yourself. Thank you !
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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oh this could gain a cult following. What a shame that it is all so true. Love is not free oh my oh me! You deserved the winning for this. I have so much to learn and gain from reading works by such talent as yourself. Thank you !
Comment Written 21-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2012
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thx kes ... you've got the ... beads ... baby ...! :) Sharyn
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Your poem made me laugh. When we went camping last year there were some hippies there. They had their guitars out and were up til all hours singing their hearts out. Each to their own I guess. Great job
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Your poem made me laugh. When we went camping last year there were some hippies there. They had their guitars out and were up til all hours singing their hearts out. Each to their own I guess. Great job
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Thx RB! glad to make you laugh!!!
Comment from rjuselius
congratulations on winning the contest! it was well-deserved!
flower power is a concept gone away for sometime now.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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congratulations on winning the contest! it was well-deserved!
flower power is a concept gone away for sometime now.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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thx rebekka! flower power gone, yes, but it was a brave generation rebelling against a government gone mad. Unfortunately the government won.
:) Sharyn
Comment from nighttripper
'You got the beads, baby!' This was great and I could relate to it easily. Yea, the good old days and the good new ones too. Some things never change though, because 'You got the beads, baby.' Thanks for sharing your 'trip' with me.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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'You got the beads, baby!' This was great and I could relate to it easily. Yea, the good old days and the good new ones too. Some things never change though, because 'You got the beads, baby.' Thanks for sharing your 'trip' with me.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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thx so much for coming on the "trip" with me then nt!!!
:))))))))))))))Sharyn
Comment from teresa.b
This was a fun and humorous poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. funny how things change, and funny how they stay the same. Congrats on your recognition and contest win!!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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This was a fun and humorous poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. funny how things change, and funny how they stay the same. Congrats on your recognition and contest win!!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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thx so much teresa - so glad you read, enjoyed, and got the point! Bless you my dear - and a double blessing for giving me one of your special '6'! It's so appreciated.
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from J. D. Means
Great Poem! Good way to relive the past and then see it in the future. How different it is looking back and comparing how we view the world, through different eyes.
Never trust anyone over 30? But now that we are over 30, how different it looks, even with the sunglasses on.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Great Poem! Good way to relive the past and then see it in the future. How different it is looking back and comparing how we view the world, through different eyes.
Never trust anyone over 30? But now that we are over 30, how different it looks, even with the sunglasses on.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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oh you have that right J.D. thank you so much!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from Val Crisson
Very nice rhythm in this one, and an old "hippy dippy girl" I love the message. So glad you kept your beads, and I kept my "old man" Far out girl keep it coming!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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Very nice rhythm in this one, and an old "hippy dippy girl" I love the message. So glad you kept your beads, and I kept my "old man" Far out girl keep it coming!
Comment Written 20-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
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thx Val! I kept mine too!
